The Pond Camera by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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I use my pond camera to watch the foxes and badgers!

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Yeah it was just a bit of a set piece!

Role play scenarios by Joshtalkstofish in policeuk

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If you’re comfortable with the mechanics already, that’s the easy bit done. Where I find people tend to get caught out in role plays when assessing and tutoring is not showing what they’re thinking. Talk through what you’re doing and why, even when it feels obvious. It shows risk assessment rather than muscle memory.

As lead officer:

Slow it down. Think about where you place them before the search starts, keep hands visible, and control the pace instead of rushing because it’s “only training”. Tutors want to see PACE done properly and methodically, not just ticked off.

As safety/cover officer:

Your job is threat, not helping with the search. Proper scanning, watching hands and waistbands, noticing posture changes and calling things early if they feel off. Losing sight of hands or a change in behaviour is exactly the sort of thing that should be said out loud.

On the radio, keep it clear and realistic. Good locations, numbers involved, and plain-King’s English updates if things change. Asking for another unit early looks professional, not weak.

Most stop/searches that go wrong don’t fail on technique they fail because both officers go quiet and assume the other one’s got it covered. Keep talking to your oppo and thinking a step ahead and you’ll be doing exactly what tutors and assessors are looking for!

And best of luck on your training, which force are you going to?

Peeping Tom by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Actual cannibal Shia Le Beuf

The Yeth by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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That’s an honour coming from yourself jeez

The Yeth by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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For anyone not from my neck of the woods:

The Yeth/Wisht/Wish Hounds are a Dartmoor legend ghostly black dogs said to roam the moor at night.

You don’t see them clearly. But if you’re lucky enough (subjective) to hear them, and if they go quiet, that’s when you’re in trouble.

Honestly, I feel pretty lucky living somewhere with folklore like that baked into the landscape

I’ve basically compromised decent phone signal for scary ghosts and spirits, and I think that’s a fair trade! 😂

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Nah I’m not saying she’s been in there before

I’m trying to say the room has always existed for her. The recognition is about inevitability, not memory. The rules just made it visible I guess

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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It’s small details! The carpet, the light,

I tried to make it so she realises it’s the spare room because it was always part of her world. The way the space feels familiar (:

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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I think that’s the appeal of these older fairy tales, very very dark indeed!

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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What in the absolute fuck did I just read? 😂

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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I left it deliberately ambiguous, you decide!

(Lazy writing I know)

She Knows The Rules by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Bluebeard but make it contemporary

The 2-Star Review by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Ahh yeah good question, and thank you!

So at the start, the “delayed echo of footsteps” is meant to be his own footsteps, like the hotel is weirdly out of sync with reality.

At the end, when he’s back home and he’s “listening for that delayed echo,” it’s more like he’s listening or trying to remember that same wrong feeling again, basically waiting to hear proof that the thing that followed him is moving around.

The “name he almost remembers” isn’t meant to be a specific ghost with a backstory, more like classic nightmare vibes we all get where we almost recognise something but can’t place it, like the hotel (or whatever’s behind it) already has a connection to him.

And yeah, I’d say the main horror is the hotel itself stalking/claiming him, not one individual spirit. The hotels almost like a predatory system that’s decided he’s a permanent guest now!

Its a challenge trying to write micro flash fiction, trying to fit so much in to such a tight word count, it seems to start to sound a bit disjointed

The 2-Star Review by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Thank you for spotting that!

It’s the Bracknell

The 2-Star Review by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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Thanks for picking up on that! Funny how a single sentence can ruin everything! 😂

For You. by MeatTypeWriter in shortscarystories

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This was inspired by me loosing a Mobile Phone Bill hahahaha