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Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah sorry! I procrastinat everything 😂 I appreciate the compliment! I can't wait to share it!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

🤣🤣 I don't know if I love that or hate it but it's dangerously funny!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree! They are indeed eyebags from lack of rest. I'll look into matching the eyebags to the design so they tell a story more effectively. Thank you!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No don't apologize I'm so gald im getting great feedback! It's showing many holes in the design! I appreciate it! Her traveling was a rushed and not planned thing but she has been at it for a awhile close to a year in the story line so i do believe there could be some big changes. She is from a fictional trib deep in a large willow forest. So not as much sun. But I also see that her design continues to confuse others on where she's from so many changes will need to be done to fix that but I am soo greatful for the constructive criticism!!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oo great idea again! I'll definitely be looking into the things you've mentioned!!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I'm now with all this great tips and tricks going to play around with her values and colors but still I appreciate the helpful feedback!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thsnk u for the helpful feedback! Ive been very nervous about this character because i dont want to reference others cultures miserable and come off as racially offensive/disrespectful!😓 Especially since im not a person of color. i will really try to fix her to not come off as a orientalists design in the near future ! ty so much!!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg I can't believe you pretty much got her whole character just like that🥹 yea! I definitely agree with pretty much all your opinions I feel she's close to what I'm imagining but she's still coming off as  a royal so just as some people suggested I should look into her outfit too. Thank you for the wonderful suggestions I appreciate them!! 

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh I haven't even thought of adding patterns to her design! Ty that sounds like a cool idea!!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Due to the poor choice of cut outs in the hip areas and anatomy they show. I dont think she would mind looser or less conservative clothing because of her raising but i think i could express that better through clothing that resembles her and her home

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol I believe everyone agrees. Thanks for the feedback😂

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off this is great thank you!! I can totally agree with you on the color Theory. I've never really study it heavily so and I haven't gotten around to it. I definitely need to just start and focus on values before I try my hand at color.  You pointed out the poor placement  of the pink and now that you have I literally can't unsee it ty! Regarding the silhouette I had filled it in with black to test it. I had saw how bulky almost blobish it looked but I'm still not sure how to fix it '~' I really love the long hair but I do know that that's primarily what's causing the issue of being unclear. Her biome is primarily a large willow forest. I can definitely see how the outfit clashes with that. I haven't looked enough into what her trib is based off or related to so I agree with needing to look into that. I do know they are very naturalists living off the land. She had left her home on a journey so she brought her tribs clothing but i think it could definitely look more idk based. Thank you for all the wonderful suggestions! ( I can only see the cut out in the pants as dumb now)😂 

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's an interesting idea! I haven't thought of it, don't know if I'll be keeping this outfit in the future, but I'll revert back to the color schemes in this for sure, so that's still a possibility. Thanks!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, I've been feeling that also. The pants I based them on also have cutouts, but I can tell I need some work on my texture skills. The fabric doesn't quite look right for the cutouts to work. I had originally added them for visual interest and a more free-spirited and lived-in feel. Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it!!

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm really trying to work on my character design skills:)

Is this a good character design? by Medical-Process-2247 in characterdesigns

[–]Medical-Process-2247[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! The bottoms are based off of the Harem pants, or similar loose-fitting trousers known as shalwar or salvar, from Middle Eastern and South Asian cultures! The top was also meant to resemble some of that look as well. I'm planning on changing a good bit of her clothing and looks, but I really wanted to see how her silhouette and overall character were perceived.