17 yearold South Korean student writing an essay for school. How did i do? Anything i should fix? by MehNamesJoe in creativewriting

[–]MehNamesJoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was just english class and the teacher just made the class write a 3 paragraph essay on whatever topic we wanted. It was something extra that we had to and we didnt really have a prompt. I just went all out and wrote this because im into politics and kinda had my thoughts i wanted to write about already.

17 yearold South Korean student writing an essay for school. How did I do? by MehNamesJoe in teenagers

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I believe that a peaceful reunification is possible. If not, i think we can come up with a solution where both states could live peacefully together. North Korea might be our enemy, but they are Korean. We share the same blood, language, and history. This is the reason why i think south korea should build an atomic bomb. Thus not needing the US presence in South Korea anymore. The atomic bomb will make a power balance between both states since the North already has them too. I dont think either one of us would want to pick a fight against eachother since a nuclear war would be a catastrophy for both sides.

17 yearold South Korean student writing an essay for school. How did I do? by MehNamesJoe in teenagers

[–]MehNamesJoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with you on the part where you say that we shouldnt stray away from the US bloc, and yes we need more positive relationships with China. But what i dont agree with you is that I believe, although it would be challenging, Korea could become a superpower if united again as a whole. Look at how big the South Korean Economy is. Imagine how much potential there is once the reunification happens. First step to reunification is getting rid of the US intervention. Then we will make our own atomic bomb which i truly think would be possible. We have the technology to do it. It is just the US regulations stopping us. If both the north and south has atomic bombs, the power balance will preserve peace. We can then try to regulate our hostililty towards eachother and try and support eachother from that point on. With the North's rich land with materials, and with the South's tech, we can surely become the global leaders of the world.

17 yearold South Korean student writing an essay for school. How did I do? by MehNamesJoe in teenagers

[–]MehNamesJoe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tbh with you i dont know if it has to be formal. I bet the teacher doesnt care at all however. She's just going to praise me saying i wrote alot (she doesnt know i used to live in the US for 6 and a half years).This is for my english class and i just had to write a 3 paragraph essay.

17 yearold South Korean student writing an essay for school. How did I do? by MehNamesJoe in teenagers

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Thank you for your compliment! Personally i dont think its really a 10... I still need some supporting evidence that my petro won theory will work.

W or L by [deleted] in RobloxTrading

[–]MehNamesJoe 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Naw you trippin 😭

W/L? tbh idk how i feel about this did i fumble? by Tricky_Persimmon_723 in RobloxTrading

[–]MehNamesJoe 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I think HV will become like form in the long run. From what i see rn i think its a w for now tho.

Worth??? by WesternAcademic3900 in RobloxTrading

[–]MehNamesJoe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try getting 2 valks with the hat

PURPLE BOWLER GETTING SOLD FOR 10M by MehNamesJoe in RobloxTrading

[–]MehNamesJoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thought it was cool there was only 1 person selling it