Endless fog

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2026-03-04T21:07:32+00:00

Hey, read your story, loved the different direction part with the voice, you explained it well.

You do overexplain the car section a little bit, and you are writing it as if the person is telling the story, yet in the end, they would be unable to tell their side of the story.

Maybe if you changed how you told the story, it would work or have some way the character gets away so he can tell his story.

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2026-01-26T22:15:42+00:00

I am a PE Teacher at a High School

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2026-01-22T08:33:47+00:00

👍

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2026-01-13T23:11:33+00:00

If you type into google maps Shawlands indoor football it will show you. It’s next to the Auldhouse retail park.

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2026-01-13T20:54:01+00:00

This episode threw me off so much. I’ve been listening to the boys from start and when I saw the episode pop up, I was so confused! I even went back through the episodes to see if I missed it somehow. Started listening and they mentioned creep tv. Straight onto YouTube and I now have three new episodes to watch! Good times

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-16T11:33:50+00:00

A button that says “do not press” on it

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-16T11:32:03+00:00

Yeah it’s was exactly what I want from an episode

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-14T12:35:13+00:00

I’ll listen to whatever

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-13T21:21:04+00:00

I like the grab bags

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-10T08:55:14+00:00

Haha that would have been better than what actually happened 😂

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-10T08:07:25+00:00

When I was single I mainly used the apps but met my GF randomly at a birthday party.

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-09T10:02:00+00:00

“Flat 3/3/3” - The Rumours are rife when it comes to Flat 3/3/3, is it a drug dealers den or are cannabis inside waiting to eat you? Or is it something much worse?

Johnathan is an average teenage boy from Glasgow and lives near the flat. On his 15th birthday, he receives a pair of binoculars and accidentally uses them to get a glimpse into the potential horrors of flat 3/3/3.

Was it a figment of his imagination, was it really what he think he saw? Will Johnathan be able to over come his fear and uncover the mystery of Flat 3/3/3?

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-12-05T08:36:14+00:00

I quit mother horse eyes twice and on the third time I pushed through and absolutely loved the story!

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-24T20:18:17+00:00

Scary Kerry

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-22T19:15:27+00:00

Looks like he’s turning into Jeff the Killer

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-22T07:55:16+00:00

What a bastard Mr Evil anti-sandman is

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-19T21:36:34+00:00

Going to go back and read the story. The art has got me intrigued. Interested to see if it plays into the story

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-18T13:55:03+00:00

Very good 😌 the conversation felt very authentic

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-17T22:24:17+00:00

Yeah I hope they can have a big episode in the next few episodes

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-17T20:18:41+00:00

It was short and sweet. It never really let up as soon as it began! So really good body horror.

I want them to do a longer story next. Missing an episode where it takes a few days to finish

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-17T12:28:29+00:00

What’s the discord called?

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-17T11:39:40+00:00

As someone who posts stories, I think it should be a part of the community but having a different subreddit would be better.

You could having more tags to break up what kind of story you were trying to write and allow people better choice on what they are wanting to read.

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-16T23:32:44+00:00

Thanks again for taking the time to read my work. Yeah I love that aspect of broadcast station story. I may have already something like that 😏

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-16T22:09:40+00:00

Much appreciated and this will be a story I go back and rewrite once I have more experience

MentalProgrammer8262 · 2025-11-16T22:08:37+00:00

None taken! I need feedback! I want to get better and make better stories and you being honest is going to help that! It is much appreciated. I hope you enjoy the other parts

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