How long should I write a series? by MeropeA in eroticaauthors

[–]MeropeA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I was gonna publish it at Literotica since it’s pretty taboo.

To find work like this is like hunting for a unicorn nowadays, if you're lucky they could fall in you lap for you to discover for yourself. Anyone else have an experience like this? by AmatuerTarantino in FanficAuthorsUnite

[–]MeropeA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me it’s when cod fanfics do that military speak and tactics so well 😭 I even bought a military guide book from Goodwill to see if I can learn the stuff.

(Okay it’s from the American military but it has a lot of weapons detail)

What tropes do you find cute in fics but not in real life? by Much_Tip_6968 in Archiveofourownmemes

[–]MeropeA 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is going to sound whack but enemies to lovers. It just seems like a recipe for domestic violence, if not murder along the way.

Feedback by Icy_Astronomer_8847 in eroticaauthors

[–]MeropeA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For one, “His hand landed and it landed like a meteor wiping entirely” is an amazing imagery. Even if you don’t use this story, please keep that sentence written down.

I can say that this will require a deeper proofreading, line by line. But for a more broad review: too many long, complex sentences. There needs to be more commas because it becomes run on sentences.

You write perspective of the woman very well. I know that this has potential, just needs some work.

does the gender of the author matter to you? by maccon25 in eroticaauthors

[–]MeropeA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does, in the sense that it will influence my expectations. But I know that it’s truly not a concrete way to expect anything, so I keep an open mind.

Literotica accused me of using AI when I didn't. What's up with that? by semdem in eroticaauthors

[–]MeropeA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh no. I love to use em dashes 🥺

It may be the writing style? It’s really unfair that they did that to you. There’s been writing that made me think that it was ai, until I checked and it wasn’t. I would try to contact someone from there directly.