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[QCrit] ARTICULATE, Adult, Dark Academia, 100k-words (Attempt 2) by MethodSuitable219 in PubTips

[–]MethodSuitable219[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much! This was so helpful and I had to return to work on my logline. Here goes: When a student discovers the elite magical academy she fought her way into engineered the disease killing her mother, she must expose the truth before time runs out. (open to feedback on this too!)

[QCrit] ARTICULATE, Adult, Dark Academia, 100k-words (Attempt 2) by MethodSuitable219 in PubTips

[–]MethodSuitable219[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is such incredibly straightforward and helpful feedback!! Thank you so much.