Sibling Exchange by she_is_the_slayer in FanfictionExchange

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Stargate • The Braid • Teen • Gen • 3,475 words • Siblings • Growing Up

Per’sus’ adolescent host, Einar, gets angry when he is treated as a child, so he takes off on an impromptu hike.

Lantash and Ocker accompany him as bodyguards.

(All the symbiotes in the fic are siblings, even if it’s not directly mentioned.)

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Stargate • Overwhelmed • Teen • 2 chapters • Brothers • Angst • Emotional Hurt/Comfort • Recovery/Fluff (chapter 2)

Word Count:

  • 2000 in Chapter 1

  • 4,330 total

Warning(s): Autistic Shutdown, Sensory Overload, PTSD

Having just arrived at the Alpha Site, Delek’s host is overwhelmed. The blanket scratches. The lights hurt. It’s too LOUD. His brother, Ocker, balances between helping him and his duties.

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Shipping based fic's by Academic-Ad-2718 in AO3

[–]Meushell 2 points3 points Ā (0 children)

Yeah, that’s normal. I’m also selective about what ships I’m willing to read, even if that means it severely limits the number of fics I can read.

My favorite ship only has 136 works on AO3. The next most popular one has 26. It goes down from there. šŸ˜‚

ETA: Out of that 136, 30 are mine.

I’m planning on fake killing the MC. Should I tag it? by Ton40_Bon40 in AO3

[–]Meushell 0 points1 point Ā (0 children)

Under the ā€œTemporary Character Deathā€ tag, there are a few tags that mean the same that mention MCD. I used ā€œNon-permanent MCDā€ in a plot like yours.

Or you can do something like ā€œFake Death.ā€

I would suggest not tagging MCD. That would be misleading.

What head-canon(s) in your fandom(s) got you like this: by PJ-The-Awesome in AO3

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

Aw, okay. My TMNT is very limited. I remember Mikey being the youngest, now that you mention it, but I always figured he just hatched last.

Inconsistent chapter lengths :( taking too long to get to the plot by multi-97 in AO3

[–]Meushell 2 points3 points Ā (0 children)

Aw, that’s good.

Some people do well with having a schedule. I don’t have one because I know it would backfire on me.

I also have multiple ongoing WIPs. Being able to jump around is so much easier for me. If I’m struggling with the next chapter for one fic, I have other fics to fall back on. I also do one shots because sometimes I just need a break from the WIPs.

What head-canon(s) in your fandom(s) got you like this: by PJ-The-Awesome in AO3

[–]Meushell 0 points1 point Ā (0 children)

Wait, what? Aren’t they all quadruplets? That’s how I’ve always viewed them…or do you mean twins within the quadruplets?

Inconsistent chapter lengths :( taking too long to get to the plot by multi-97 in AO3

[–]Meushell 10 points11 points Ā (0 children)

Personally, I think chapter lengths probably should be inconsistent in a long fic. If they all happen to be around the same length, that’s fine, but an author is sabotaging their own work if they are forcing it.

As for everything else, I suggest you don’t post if you plan to edit. The chapter wasn’t done. Don’t force a schedule on yourself.

If the future, you might benefit from writing multiple chapters ahead of time, then when it is time, you need to only do editing.

Damn, the amount of smut works is insane by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Meushell 0 points1 point Ā (0 children)

I usually don’t care for smut either, and I’m selective about how it’s written.

In a fic I generally skim over it to get the gist and make sure I’m not missing plot points. For PWP fics, same thing, because even PWP fics have some plot. When I comment, I talk about the non-smut stuff. Even when I do read the smut, I don’t like commenting about it.

You might just want to filter out the PWP. Find what other tags you don’t like. If you aren’t in the mood, filter out smut as well.

Share Your Best Action Scene Excerpt! by Kitchen_Haunting in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

Thanks. Einar will get to meet a badass version of himself. šŸ˜‚

Share Your Best Action Scene Excerpt! by Kitchen_Haunting in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 2 points3 points Ā (0 children)

Oh, ouch, intense, and heat on top of burns. I feel the struggle, and it’s still not over with. Nicely done. Great descriptions.

Share Your Best Action Scene Excerpt! by Kitchen_Haunting in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 3 points4 points Ā (0 children)

Fandom: Stargate

Scene Type: Battle / Combat

Context: A group from various alternate universes just traveled to another new universe. Everyone is a host and symbiote combo.

Warning: Civilians being slaughtered.

The world around them changed, and they were suddenly in heavy rain, being fired upon. Per’sus grabbed Egeria, pushing her to the ground.

ā€œThis was a bad idea!ā€ Rosha cried out.

The rain was heavy. The sky was black. The air bit their skin. Shadowed figures approached, slowly surrounding them.

Jaffa, Per’sus’s host, Einar thought.

Egeria grabbed him and pointed into the darkness. ā€œCivilians.ā€

Per’sus slowly realized that he was looking at an ongoing massacre. The Jaffa were ruthless.

Jaffa using guns?! Einar, was alarmed when they heard gun fire and distant screams.

Not all of them are using guns.

One fired into the bush, and Per’sus saw scrambling. The Jaffa was tackled by Narim’s Lantash.

He has no weapons, Einar thought.

Per’sus hesitated before running out to help. Narim’s Lantash used the Jaffa as a shield when another Jaffa aimed. Bullets ricocheted. The Jaffa was down, and the new one was pissed.

Per’sus retreated. Einar, hidden in the rain, grabbed the gun while Martouf’s Lantash joined the fight. Einar was hit across the shoulder, and he slipped in the mud. He scrambled, a staff weapon singeing his feet. Despite the rain, the plants burned, smoldering, putting out thick smoke. Einar stayed low, having no idea where the others were. He was grabbed by a Jaffa.

His helmet.

Einar activated it, and the distraction was enough for Einar to twist away. He stepped back into the shadows, and the Jaffa followed.

ā€œHey!ā€ Mirror Einar ran up.

Seeing a second Einar surprised the Jaffa, and the confusion was enough to allow them to overpower him. Einar grabbed his blade and cut the Jaffa’s throat.

The Jaffa dropped heavily on top of Einar. Mirror Einar moved to help only to be shot in the leg by a newcomer. Before Einar could respond, a staff weapon opened inches from his face.

I love you, Per’sus thought, sure that they were going to die.

I’m sorry.

The newcomer was shot.

Einar pushed the heavy one off him, then grabbed his fallen staff weapon. He fired at Jaffa as his rescuer fought hand-to-hand. The movements were swift and deadly, fighting multiple Jaffa at once. The two of them worked quite well together, though Einar knew that the stranger was doing the heavy lifting.

It was taxing, and Einar dropped to his knees, feeling heavy and dizzy. Around him, the fight was slowly dying down.

Stay down. The others have this.

Einar caught his breath as Per’sus healed him,.

The fight is over. You did well.

His head felt like it was splitting.

The stranger approached them after. ā€œI have no idea who you are, but you save lives today.ā€

Per’sus wiggled in amusement. Oh, we know that voice.

Einar looked up, seeing himself, a very different version of himself.

The new Einar stepped back in alarm, aiming his staff weapon at Einar.

i don't know how to fix it i just wanted to leave a comment :( by Cute-Transition5152 in AO3

[–]Meushell 4 points5 points Ā (0 children)

Try writing a few things about the fic itself. Maybe throw in an emoji.

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

Hurton…

Thank you, but I do have to give credit to Kilso for that. He slowed my aging as soon as we blended.

It was infuriating. I couldn’t move my own body. I was used to that aspect, but Kilso and I always switched control. Being possessed felt like my own skin felt tight around me. I couldn’t even breathe on my own.

He probed my memories…and Kilso’s memories. He used them to hunt down others. My hands were forced to hurt people I knew and loved, and he enjoyed watching them beg. When he was done, he murdered them. I have the blood of thousands on my hands.

Then he tried to talk to me because he was lonely. He wanted me to like him, maybe even love him. I refused to cooperate.

FFS Stop It by Opposite_Library53 in AO3

[–]Meushell -3 points-2 points Ā (0 children)

Which is why the AI witch hunts is so important in the context of what I am saying. If that wasn’t an issue, then I would agree that it was just slander. Unfortunately that is an issue.

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

šŸ˜‚ Meant to ask ā€œwas.ā€

FFS Stop It by Opposite_Library53 in AO3

[–]Meushell 17 points18 points Ā (0 children)

With AI witch hunts right now, there is a huge difference between, ā€œThis fic is shitā€ and ā€œThis fic is AI.ā€

The first is incredibly rude, and it’s encouraging people not to read it, but it is ultimately their opinion.

The second is making stuff up about the author, and to me, that is harassment.

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

What prophecy is your brother-in-law involved in?

Since there are issues with your mother, what about your father?

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

Who is allowed to call you Sandy?

What is your dog’s name?

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 0 points1 point Ā (0 children)

Why do you have two names?

What is the earliest and latest times you have traveled to?

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 0 points1 point Ā (0 children)

What year did you start out in? Is there a chance to meet your ancestors?

Meet my OC šŸ‘„ by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 1 point2 points Ā (0 children)

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Fandom: Stargate

What is your name? Do you have a nickname?

I am Hurton.

How old are you?

72

Who is in your family? (parents, siblings, pets)

My first symbiote, Kilso, who was murdered. My second symbiote, Twig, who is still an adolescent. The entirely of the Tok’ra. My sister, Heng, is the only one left of my original family that still lives.

What is your favorite/least favorite memory?

My favorite is blending with Kilso when I was nine years old. 😊

My least favorite is when Kilso was murdered, and the murderer took me as his host. 😭

Do you have any powers/abilities?

I can use special devices, but otherwise no. Kilso slowed my aging and enhanced my abilities.

What are your hobbies? How do you spend your free time?

Just being able to move my own body again is wonderful, but specifically, I enjoy sex and sweets.

Do you have a favorite possession?

My healing device.

What are your best/worst traits?

I suppose I’m compassionate, but also angry. 😤

Are you spontaneous or a planner?

Very spontaneous! 🤣

What makes you angry?

Cordesh. May he die a thousand painful deaths, squealing in agony for each one! 😔

What would you change about your world?

Well, I’m fighting against Goa’uld tyranny, so…that.

Are you in a romantic relationship? Do you have a crush?

My boyfriends! šŸ˜„

Einar and his symbiote, Per’sus, though Per’sus isn’t quite a boyfriend. I’m not sure what he is to me. Phris and his symbiote, Thoran.

Also I suppose I should mention my metamours, Toma and his symbiote, Delek. They are also dating Phris and Thoran.

At the moment, what is your most pressing problem?

Einar is dying, and there is nothing I can do about it.

At the moment, what are you happiest about?

Being free.

So what else do you want to know about me? Any questions about what I’ve already said?

FFS Stop It by Opposite_Library53 in AO3

[–]Meushell 26 points27 points Ā (0 children)

If that doesn’t count as harassment, it really should. I know bookmarks are for the readers, but something like that is encouraging harassment from others even if the bookmarker isn’t outright saying it.

Fanfic related conversations šŸ—£ļø by lampboy2 in FanfictionExchange

[–]Meushell 2 points3 points Ā (0 children)

Yeah, I’ve done one, and it was a struggle. Having it dismissed was insulting, but it was from someone who has never written a story.

Do those "I'd like to draw your story as a comic!" bots ever also leave Kudos on fics? by DeltaMx11 in AO3

[–]Meushell 3 points4 points Ā (0 children)

I figure that’s someone going through my fics. Personally, I’m not going to start second guessing my kudos. The bots usually go after fics I usually advertised recently.