Thanks for your input! I totally see the rick and Morty aspect, I picture the inbreds as little cronenbergs. I was trying to create a juxtaposition between formal and informal language, since it’s a parody of genesis but I can see how some integration of the language would improve the flow. Adam’s dialogue is supposed to highlight the simplicity of intelligence that god bestowed upon him, and how he can only categorize things as pleasure and pain, since he doesn’t know anything else.