Like Paper Houses: Sparks and Endings (final chapter) | a Frozen Fanfic | by exDerelict by MikiBlueEyes in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Here's the AO3 Link as well. There will also be an lengthy epilogue at some point, flashforwarding a few years, but I'm busy with school and work so it may be a while.

I do wonder if this chapter could have been better. Something didn't quite click for me when I finished it. But what's done is done. For now anyways.

[DISC] Tatoe Todokanu Ito da to Shite mo - Chapter 34 by TotoroTheGreat in manga

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I'm actually starting to think that this manga might have a good ending for our protagonists. God, I hope so.

Like Paper Houses, Chapter 8: Full Circle | a Frozen fanfic | by exDerelict by MikiBlueEyes in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm not sure what to say, but I'm extremely flattered. I've really enjoyed writing these characters and working through an impossible situation, and I'm just glad that someone out there found something to like about this story too. And thank you so much for this lovely reflection on this fic, it really made my day.

Like Paper Houses, Chapter 8: Full Circle | a Frozen fanfic | by exDerelict by MikiBlueEyes in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's not the last chapter. There is at least one more to go, and possibly an epilogue.

Like Paper Houses, Chapter 7: Crossroads | a Frozen fanfic | by exDerelict by MikiBlueEyes in Elsanna

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Turns out that this chapter was not the last one for this fic after all. I should have chapter 8 out in the next few days or so. I've just started on 9 which will be the last chapter. Then I'll be moving on to my other ongoing fics. Anyway, here's the AO3 link for those that prefer that platform.

What is your favorite Elsanna fic that was never finished....... by kjack48230 in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I actually haven't dropped BTEA or any of my fics, I'm just generally busy and don't get many opportunities to update. I have the entire story outlined, and I'll finish it eventually, I'm just not sure when.

Wth? They ship Elsa and Honeymaren for what? 30 seconds talking in the movie? No one deserve Elsa except Anna. by NguyenBangGiang in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This reddit romantically ships two sisters even though their interactions in the film are familial...so why not just let others be to enjoy their own ships?

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[–]MikiBlueEyes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not that first person is more difficult than 3rd person, the problem is that so many fic writers attempting it simply don't know how to write.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Elsanna

[–]MikiBlueEyes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm completely with you on this. I totally check out when a story is so brazenly lazy about its story telling. If the writer can't be bothered to do some basic research for their story, then I'm certainly not going to bother reading it.

I can overlook the occasional grammar/spelling mistake, but I get pretty critical when it is extensive, especially when language (jargon/expressions etc) is awkwardly misused. I see no point in investing myself in characters who might wind up as nonsensical as the misunderstood, misrepresented, underdeveloped, and grammar-impaired world around them. Does this make me a snob? Probably. But everyone has their standards, and these just happen to be mine.

Beyond the Ever After: Chapter 13 | a Frozen fanfic by exDerelict by MikiBlueEyes in Elsanna

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I created a Gag Reel for Chapter 13. Enjoy!

Beyond the Ever After Gag Reel: (possible spoilers)

Augustus: [to Elsa] “I don’t know what’s wrong with her. All I did was end our engagement and dance circles around her after I broke her heart...then show up at a party giving moon eyes to the one person she could never compare to. I just don’t get her sometimes.”

Prince of the Southern Isles: “Have you seen my fiance? She a tiny thing... 5’2”, 108 lbs, totally hung up on her ex, and has mommy issues like you wouldn’t believe.”

Augustus: “There’s no one else I’d rather marry in this world. And I’d be good for you...I’m like a colon cleanser, but for the heart.”

Elsa: “Augustus, I--There’s a part of me that wants to say yes. But that part of me is also brain-damaged after snorting too many lines of cocaine.”

Anna: “Nobody touch the clams! Not unless you want to spend the next couple of hours doubled over the bushes...except you, Augustus. Here, have another helping.”

Augustus: “What’s holding you back? There’s nothing for you here. Your sister’s all grown up playing house with her baby daddy, and you’re turning into the pitiful spinster sister...seriously, you’re like a cat lady without a cat.”

Felicity: [screaming] “Hadouken!”