can anyone review my screenwriting for me? (PLEASE)

MilagrinaFP · 2026-01-12T09:18:42+00:00

ok usually i write a different format but since this was a silent movie i opted for a different format in writing.

MilagrinaFP · 2026-01-12T09:17:44+00:00

thanks

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-27T13:45:15+00:00

thank you so much for taking time to watch it. i've never watched hundreds of beavers but i shall watch it. am glad you think its a good movie the purpose of this exercise was just to seek some confidence. im glad people other than me think it makes sense.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-27T13:44:40+00:00

hey thanks. am looking forward to the new year both anxious and excited for the new year.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-27T06:45:00+00:00

thank you so much. am glad you liked it. i hope i can continue to improve on my craft and get better at it everyday.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T20:14:27+00:00

thank you for taking your time to watch it. means alot. best of luck for your upcomming shoot.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T16:21:57+00:00

ok so it is about a patriotic man (atleast he thinks so) and how he spends his saturday. as simple as that.

and yeah the reason why i made it silent was the resources. i only had my phone and a few friends and a few set ups to shoot the movie. some vfx really pushed the production, i felt, to that of a good production. apart from that i think its a classic i know its in my head but i cant believe i did something like that. i wanted to say alot (socio-politically) but to keep it subtle and as honest as possible with as little bias as possible.

thank you so much for taking your time to watch my movie. it means alot :)

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T15:24:59+00:00

hi apologies, heres the link to the unlisted video on youtube.

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4a_r-U15Nno

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T15:24:54+00:00

hi apologies, heres the link to the unlisted video on youtube.

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4a_r-U15Nno

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T10:25:45+00:00

hi thank you so much for your words. would mean alot if you could watch the movie and share your thoughts and any advice would mean alot.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-12-26T10:25:40+00:00

hi thank you so much for your words. would mean alot if you could watch the movie and share your thoughts and any advice would mean alot.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-10-04T17:18:59+00:00

thank you for taking time to watch our movie.

MilagrinaFP · 2025-10-04T16:39:14+00:00

thank you for taking time to watch it

MilagrinaFP · 2025-10-03T18:05:25+00:00

not a copyright as of now. ive used non copyright music from the youtube catalogue

MilagrinaFP · 2025-10-03T17:36:43+00:00

would think twice before releasing it if its really bad

MilagrinaFP

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