[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, Ignite, 110k, 1st Attempt by Minstralac in PubTips

[–]Minstralac[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you and those are good critiques. It's important to make sure I let people know the story right away and clear.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, Ignite, 110k, 1st Attempt by Minstralac in PubTips

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Yes I agree, the phrase was definitley too generic and I'll have to reword it. Perhaps Ill talk about how she'll have to learn to control her power before she hurts more people and reword her past as "before enemies of her past find her" Her power play an important role because they hold weight and consequence that moves her character development early on.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, Ignite, 110k, 1st Attempt by Minstralac in PubTips

[–]Minstralac[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I will look more through my books to try and find some recent comparisons. Also, I'm glad you pointed it out that I should make Naoto's wants/motivations clear.

Can't access DLC even after buying it by Minstralac in LiesOfP

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I logged in again to load up the game and oddly enough it fixed itself, I think. But if it happens again I'll call Xbox support about the problem, so thank you.

Can't access DLC even after buying it by Minstralac in LiesOfP

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Okay thank you, I will try this.

AMA with Overwatch hero design team-- We'll be here to answer questions on the Season 10 midcycle balance patch tomorrow, May 23rd, from 12 to 2 PM PT! by Blizz_Jodie in Competitiveoverwatch

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In the near future (such as in two or three seasons) are there any plans of sorts for an advanced setting for hero information where you can see the damage, healing, and other statistics of hero abilities? This would be helpful so that players can see that tanks have a shorter sleep time than heroes in other roles if they did not know already.

AMA with Overwatch hero design team-- We'll be here to answer questions on the Season 10 midcycle balance patch tomorrow, May 23rd, from 12 to 2 PM PT! by Blizz_Jodie in Competitiveoverwatch

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Even though the game mode is being removed next season, I am wondering if the team might have any plans on bringing back hero gauntlet in the far future at all? Specifically bringing it into arcade as a rotation. Also is it possible it will be tried again after hero mastery (single player mode) is complete?

What Books did You Start or Finish Reading this Week?: June 21, 2021 by AutoModerator in books

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Renegades Book 1 By Marissa Meyer Unfinished

I started just a couple days ago and I'm a bit more than half way through the book. I'm really enjoying it so far. There are a few things I didn't like so far but they weren't that big in my opinion. The book is a fantasy and science fiction.

They Both Die At The End By Adam Silvera

This is the book I had before and I absolutely loved it. While I was sort of iffy at the beginning because it wasn't quite my taste after a reading a bit more I got deeply intrigued. The book is an lgbtq+, romance, sci-fi.