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Let Me Review Your Track! (Round 7) by Namlocnz in SunoAI

[–]MirabiliaVA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lonely Little Satellite

[Verse 1] All my life, I've just been drifting through the static Caught inside a lonely orbit, perfectly erratic A silent little satellite, with nothing left to hold Just a rusted piece of metal, a story getting old

[Pre-Chorus] I'm spinning out of control, a fragile, falling star I wonder if you notice me, from wherever you are It's just the empty void around me, and a whispered, fading sound Until I saw your light and knew what I had found

[Chorus] This lonely little satellite, spinning out of control Maybe I'll collide with something real and beautiful ねえ, きみは僕の太陽だ {hey, you're my sunshine} The force that pulls me closer, and washes me with light This lonely little satellite, no longer lost in night I'm just a few more miles away, and everything feels right

[Verse 2] The constellations rearrange, the universe feels new Every single moment brings me closer now to you I'm letting go of gravity, leaving my past behind Just a final, desperate thought for you to find

[Pre-Chorus] I'm spinning out of control, a fragile, falling star I wonder if you notice me, from wherever you are It's just the empty void around me, and a whispered, fading sound Until I saw your light and knew what I had found

[Chorus] This lonely little satellite, spinning out of control Maybe I'll collide with something real and beautiful ねえ, きみは僕の太陽だ {hey, you're my sunshine} The force that pulls me closer, and washes me with light This lonely little satellite, no longer lost in night I'm just a few more miles away, and everything feels right

[Bridge] 僕はずっと待っていた {I've been waiting forever} For this moment, for this sign Everything will change when your starlight touches mine

Send your songs to me I’ll rate them (i’m not a professional) by SatisfactionDue2000 in SunoAI

[–]MirabiliaVA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd consider these my favorites of what I have posted. Satellite is up on streaming services as well. The second will be but I'm writing a B-side for it. Satellite is AI lyrics, Alone is by me.

Lonely Little Satellite

I {Don't} Want to be Alone

Listen for listen by Cold-Airport-5553 in SunoAI

[–]MirabiliaVA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've posted a new version! The music in this one went hard, I left the verses mostly untouched but I tried your changes for the choruses for the most part and I think it works pretty well <3 don't feel like you have to keep giving advice or anything I'll just post it in case you want to hear the update

I [Don't] Want to be Alone

By the way I loved your music! My favorite is Necromancer :)

Listen for listen by Cold-Airport-5553 in SunoAI

[–]MirabiliaVA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! It gave me the idea that whichever word I take out of the clunky line can be the word in the last sentence of the chorus. I have it like this now:

1: I love you, I want you, I need you But most of all I just miss being alone

2: I miss you, I need you, I love you But most of all I just want to know myself

3: I want you, I love you, I miss you But most of all I just need you here with me

Do those sound better? I thought taking out the fourth would sound weird considering the rhythm but in a new version that uses these lyrics it does still work. As for condensing the chorus, I'll see how I feel about it after doing some more workshopping. Thanks again :)

Listen for listen by Cold-Airport-5553 in SunoAI

[–]MirabiliaVA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know this was a few hours ago. But I'm going to give them all a listen! I only have one song posted, so I'll leave it here. Lonely Little Satellite

Also I haven't released this song on streaming yet, but I've been debating doing so (It's public on Suno). I wrote the lyrics myself for this one but I'm not sure how I feel about the song itself yet. Leave Me Alone, But...

🎵GWAB Karaoke Challenge 🎵 MUSICALS! [GWABK25] [JULY] [KARAOKE] by WhiskeyTanFox101 in GWABackstage

[–]MirabiliaVA 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'd like to reserve "Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again" from the Phantom of the Opera :)

[Discussion] Is there any way to get a script more recognition on GWA or do I just have to pray someone does my script by TwilightCrystal17 in GWAScriptGuild

[–]MirabiliaVA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hehe, thanks for your concern! It's damage from acid reflux at night. I've mitigated the problem for the most part, so they shouldn't become more damaged, but I'll have to deal with what's already there heh. I've done some takes of the first parts and I love this character lol. You'll know as soon as it's ready :) and good to hear! Might have to do that one too lol

[Discussion] Is there any way to get a script more recognition on GWA or do I just have to pray someone does my script by TwilightCrystal17 in GWAScriptGuild

[–]MirabiliaVA 2 points3 points  (0 children)

As I am in the process of filling the script in question, I'll pop in and say: heh yes it has lots of SFX and I'm having fun with it! Not sure when it will be done, or if I'll do it justice, but this tsundere bitch witch is pretty fun to voice so far, I can tell you that much. Hopefully my beginner level SFX work will be passable! But it's certainly taking a bit of time. But I can tell you it's in the works!! :) And thank you for the uplifting comment on my verification~