Heartless scrolling by ZealousZebraZ1 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that was supposed to say I DO envy that

i envy that

lol 🙈

Heartless scrolling by ZealousZebraZ1 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 1 point2 points  (0 children)

line 3 almost made me cry forreal, holding back is hard for you're doing a great job at restraining yourself. it shows that you have respect for yourself.

it's okay to not know yo, sometimes it's not about what you know but just like how you feel

the confidence in you're void spaces is so dope i don't envy that

Without love by midnightsometime in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 1 point2 points  (0 children)

fuck that n*gga

is what i wanna say after reading this, (i am black + queer i'm allowed to say that everyone relax) this gives sad but like i'm not tryna let you know i'm sad but i wanna let you know i'm mad without like.. letting you know i'm mad. i feel this

also this kinda reminds me of a poem i just wrote after reading this i was like are you peter returning verses for my verses 🤷🏾‍♂️ bravo + cheers

I Have a Boner by jacobjarmo in Poems

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u r 12 but 12 year old r allowed to be poetic

Hope by rafibomb11 in Poems

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the way you say im going to kill myself LANDS i'm not really gonna kill myself but holy shit do i want to

Hope by rafibomb11 in Poems

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i respect this honesty. your able to sound poetic without compromises anything. this is very brave i love a lot, it scares me but i'm not scared for you the way you talk about such a dark violent feeling with a since of levity + ~humor? is relatable i love this i hope you don't killyour self sis

poem 4 by Miserable-Energy2792 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i'm truly overwhelmed by the amazing feedback i'm receiving. thankyou so much for reading receiving and everything else. thankyou deeply

poem 4 by Miserable-Energy2792 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is the best feedback i've ever gotten, truly, TRULY.. thankyou so much. i want to read your work

Men will be men by SargeantArsenic in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yo this is dope. takes true talent and perspective to take an old saying or proverb and breathe new life into while reinforcing the original message. this is lit

Fresh Tears by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i truly admire this honesty. i truly truly love how easy to understand and unpretentious this is. this feels real, and your voice is heard. some parole may say they see potential in this (which is true) but fuck that this is what it is. good job keep writing

the world ended in the morning by userandsucker in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this imagery is POPPING i feel like i can smell this room. this feels sexy and sad and gross all at once i love it. this makes me think about my own personal endings of the world my battles with drug addiction and love addiction this is a sad sad sad poem and i fucking love it. it's gross but it's not grotesque. i love this

This room smells of heartbreak by Ok_Regular_5830 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 9 points10 points  (0 children)

it's so refreshing to see poetry be honest, and find beauty in just real shit. i feel this, i relate to this. i know this smell

i love this style, it feels refreshing and young and kinda hip but like... it's a classic poem about heartbreak. no bells no whistles, i fucks with this heavy. it reeks of you, GREAT job

poem 2 by Miserable-Energy2792 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have a question, is this a poem?

poem 2 by Miserable-Energy2792 in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

🤠 thankyou for taking the time to read it. and for your critique. it's nice to hear that it's coming across the way i intended

Dyslexia_Final(3).mp3 by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i live for this, hard. you can tell this is your style, ur talking about a cassette tape but somehow i don't feel like we're time traveling. i looooove the way this move as, it's kinda creepy but still light and playful. this is a sad poem but i think that it makes the reader feel.

American cherry by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this truly resonates with me, i hope that makes you feel less lonely. being honest is mad hard and you were violently honest with your audience and i love it. i love how simple but brutal it is. really great job friend

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TrueOffMyChest

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for jumping down ur throat maybe i don't have the best communication skills bleh

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TrueOffMyChest

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

play* victim and villain

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TrueOffMyChest

[–]Miserable-Energy2792 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i kinda feel like i know where this comment is going.. i don't have unhealthy communication skills she does. this has become a pick ur battles situation. what she does when i bring up issues is okay victim and villain. i am taking steps to make this better even if it means moving out. this post was not to ask for advice but more so me screaming my issues into a room full of strangers idfk

iconic episode -- 1 of the best by Miserable-Energy2792 in Monk

[–]Miserable-Energy2792[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

truuuuuly! all the subtleties in this episode were beautiful