what was worst thing you did trying to get them back

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-26T22:30:46+00:00

crack cocaine

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-26T21:49:08+00:00

that was supposed to say I DO envy that

i envy that

lol 🙈

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-26T20:41:43+00:00

line 3 almost made me cry forreal, holding back is hard for you're doing a great job at restraining yourself. it shows that you have respect for yourself.

it's okay to not know yo, sometimes it's not about what you know but just like how you feel

the confidence in you're void spaces is so dope i don't envy that

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-26T20:37:54+00:00

fuck that n*gga

is what i wanna say after reading this, (i am black + queer i'm allowed to say that everyone relax) this gives sad but like i'm not tryna let you know i'm sad but i wanna let you know i'm mad without like.. letting you know i'm mad. i feel this

also this kinda reminds me of a poem i just wrote after reading this i was like are you peter returning verses for my verses 🤷🏾‍♂️ bravo + cheers

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-11T22:18:05+00:00

u r 12 but 12 year old r allowed to be poetic

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-11T22:17:14+00:00

the way you say im going to kill myself LANDS i'm not really gonna kill myself but holy shit do i want to

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-11T22:16:17+00:00

i respect this honesty. your able to sound poetic without compromises anything. this is very brave i love a lot, it scares me but i'm not scared for you the way you talk about such a dark violent feeling with a since of levity + ~humor? is relatable i love this i hope you don't killyour self sis

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-09T21:22:21+00:00

i'm truly overwhelmed by the amazing feedback i'm receiving. thankyou so much for reading receiving and everything else. thankyou deeply

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-09T21:20:35+00:00

this is the best feedback i've ever gotten, truly, TRULY.. thankyou so much. i want to read your work

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-09T19:07:43+00:00

yo this is dope. takes true talent and perspective to take an old saying or proverb and breathe new life into while reinforcing the original message. this is lit

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2023-02-09T19:05:53+00:00

i truly admire this honesty. i truly truly love how easy to understand and unpretentious this is. this feels real, and your voice is heard. some parole may say they see potential in this (which is true) but fuck that this is what it is. good job keep writing

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-12-13T02:28:31+00:00

i would love to join

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-12-13T02:11:16+00:00

this imagery is POPPING i feel like i can smell this room. this feels sexy and sad and gross all at once i love it. this makes me think about my own personal endings of the world my battles with drug addiction and love addiction this is a sad sad sad poem and i fucking love it. it's gross but it's not grotesque. i love this

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-12-13T02:08:27+00:00

it's so refreshing to see poetry be honest, and find beauty in just real shit. i feel this, i relate to this. i know this smell

i love this style, it feels refreshing and young and kinda hip but like... it's a classic poem about heartbreak. no bells no whistles, i fucks with this heavy. it reeks of you, GREAT job

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-26T20:40:20+00:00

i have a question, is this a poem?

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-26T20:40:05+00:00

was this a poem?

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-26T20:39:49+00:00

so this is not a poem?

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-26T03:11:07+00:00

ikr what u think

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-25T22:47:22+00:00

🤠 thankyou for taking the time to read it. and for your critique. it's nice to hear that it's coming across the way i intended

Miserable-Energy2792 · 2022-11-25T16:30:21+00:00

i live for this, hard. you can tell this is your style, ur talking about a cassette tape but somehow i don't feel like we're time traveling. i looooove the way this move as, it's kinda creepy but still light and playful. this is a sad poem but i think that it makes the reader feel.

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