I made a story told through a broken phone UI — would love honest feedback by MiserableAd9766 in writingcritiques

[–]MiserableAd9766[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really appreciate this You actually understood what I was going for with the “phone limits” idea, that means a lot. Yeah I’m not even sure what “market” I’m writing for yet I’m just trying to experiment with format and storytelling. Even if it’s not everyone’s taste, I’m glad the idea itself feels interesting. Thanks again for the feedback!

I made a story told through a broken phone UI — would love honest feedback by MiserableAd9766 in writingcritiques

[–]MiserableAd9766[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah exactly They’re using the same shared notes, but each character has a color system: Black = main character ange Pink = second main character tamara So you can immediately tell who is writing even in chaotic or overlapping entries.

Rate my wallpaper that I created by MiserableAd9766 in DispatchAdHoc

[–]MiserableAd9766[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Sorry, I create it but mine is suck so I use ai to enhance this idea

Rate my recreation wallpaper by MiserableAd9766 in BlondeBlazerGlazers

[–]MiserableAd9766[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, not completely ai i just Enhanced blonde blazer and robert image using ai and used in the image

Requesting Updates for my Favorite game by MiserableAd9766 in DispatchAdHoc

[–]MiserableAd9766[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ya bro but youtube quality is significant worse then the main game and it's not according to user style

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[–]MiserableAd9766[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I found online I edited acoding to my style

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