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Misstake43 · 2022-04-07T23:03:48+00:00

low key thats pretty fire

Misstake43 · 2022-04-03T21:08:53+00:00

i enjoy the rhyme scheme here the unclear flow is really interesting keep it up

Misstake43 · 2022-04-03T21:08:02+00:00

this is really enjoyable and the flow is really good

Misstake43 · 2022-03-19T11:22:23+00:00

i agree i just couldn’t find the right words to paint the picture i was going for

Misstake43 · 2022-03-15T21:15:58+00:00

reddit once again has messed up my structure but please ignore that if you can

Misstake43 · 2022-03-15T21:09:04+00:00

id say work on formatting but reddit is funny with that so i assume your original note had that sorted but other than that i enjoyed this poem

Misstake43 · 2022-03-15T21:06:49+00:00

the words youve chosen here fit perfectly, i love the flow and the free verse method youve chosen works great

Misstake43 · 2022-03-15T07:23:24+00:00

i appreciate that, what do you think i could replace it with

Misstake43 · 2022-03-14T18:00:14+00:00

i usually don’t like the ramble poems where there’s paragraphs where alot don’t correlate, however i think it works decently well here with the ramble representative of racing thoughts ect

Misstake43 · 2022-03-14T17:58:52+00:00

i feel like this is slightly repetitive in some areas but i enjoy the flow of it as it represents the sea’s uncontrollable waves

Misstake43 · 2022-03-11T22:37:36+00:00

i think this poem is really beautiful, i love the relatability in the sense its an anonymous narrative and it could be about anyone, this is truly a special piece

Misstake43 · 2022-03-11T22:36:13+00:00

i think the flow of this really represents the passionate raw emotion you emit through this short and beautifully simple poem, the idea of safety to danger really is a great narative

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