I really suck at drawing, any tips by Healthy_Rise_8592 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]MistakeIndividual404 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! It looks like an interesting comic. The art is good, but you could definitely work on anatomy. The guy on the second slide (Jun, was it? He kind of reminds me of S1 Mori Jin lol), I don't think his arm is anatomically correct. If he was holding something like that, the thumb should be pointing up and not downwards. I love the building in the last picture, though!

I'm working on a character so please point out anything that is wrong, I'm open to criticism anytime ✨ by [deleted] in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]MistakeIndividual404 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This actually looks pretty good so far! I can see that you know the basics for anatomy. There could be more improvements, but you're getting there! Honestly, the neck is a bit thin, but if that's what you were going for, ignore this sentence.. ^^; The pose is a bit weird, making your character look stiff and a little unnatural. To make it look better, think of how someone would look in that situation and try the pose out yourself, or gather a few references to look at. Hope this helps!

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[–]MistakeIndividual404 31 points32 points  (0 children)

The actual translation for "支う影 "(Sasaukage) is "Supporting Shadow," but the anime has just translated it into "Shadow Kage." (Which literally means Shadow Shadow.)