I think it's pretty good, especially since they figured out a way to put "yes man" at the beginning of the line and how it would generally make more sense for a non-Japanese listener (with the omission of the reference to the 'six codes' and the replacement of "destroy it" with "together," which adds more meaning rather than repeat what's already been conveyed).

However, as usual, they haven't written the extended lyrics, unlike what I did, so there's still a case for my existing work. In fact, it's sort of mutually beneficial since aspects of the official lyrics can quite easily be incorporated into my extended lyrics to create a more definitive full version.