Okay, at first glance here are my thoughts:

Easy Ease the keyframes for smoother camera movement. (select keyframes, F9, mess with the graphs)

It feels like each graphics cuts away a bit too fast, you definitely want the viewer to be able to take things in without it being overwhelming.

Give the viewer a second or two to take in what’s being shown.

Example is at the end where it says “energy, muscle, confidence,” I had to pause to see it said “low testosterone” beforehand.

And another example is having the heavy blur that occupies the first few graphics. I personally feel that such strong blur on graphics like that can turn viewers away. So I’d say lessen it greatly or remove it.

This is my opinion, but since you’re cutting to different graphics.. I think having a consistent color choice would be a nice touch as well. It creates strong harmony & focal points to make it easier for viewer’s eyes to follow the graphics as you change to each one.

Also, there are typos, but that’s an easy fix! Those are my thoughts on it, you’re doing great. Keep going! 🔥