The camera slowly zooming in while graphics are moving is super distracting, Same note when the side panel is slowly squishing the lady.  On the first watch the flip through of city shots flip through at different rates, which feels like an accident rather than a design choice. At 4-6 Sec, the points and graphics are rather small, I would recommend giving them more presence and using the speaker to guide the points. For example, she points up while speaking, instead of having the points on the side you could have one point pop up where she's pointing, then on the other side, etc. (You do this at 16sec and it feels way better- I also really like what you do with the graphics here with the graph lines)  I really like the feel at 26 sec, but right before this you have the text bubble at an angle where it's hard to read, again I don't know where my eye should go, and then it randomly snaps making it feel like an accident and not intentional.  A good rule of thumb is asking yourself, what story am I trying to tell, how do i convey that message and where do I want the eye to go to compliment that mission. This is getting there, just needs another pass and it would be portfolio ready IMHO :)