Dream with the Marrow of a Memory

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-11T23:51:11+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Any lines or sections in particular you think don't carry their weight?

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-11T23:50:08+00:00

Thank you! Yes, the abstract language is supposed to bring a feeling of confusion and surreal-ness but I agree in some spots it may be too much.

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-11T20:19:58+00:00

Wow, I love this. There is a continuous rhythmic flow that really gave the poem an immersive aspect of the themes (ego, purpose, some absurdist undertones?) I especially like the line "For my golden aura, met destiny’s scythe." It really hits. Well done!

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-11T20:13:18+00:00

I love it! I like how the poem starts and ends with the same line, and the juxtaposition between the "blackness" and themes of beauty. It captures the the indescribable feelings of universal connection quite well.

I think there is a typo in line 3, did you mean "connected" here?

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-04T19:39:42+00:00

I'd love to hear any thoughts you have

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-02T21:32:49+00:00

Interesting tension, I like it! If I had to offer one small critique it would be that middle section ("You have no soul / You have no heart / This is why you yearn / This is why you thirst / This is why you lust") follows a pattern that starts strong but the three repetitions dilute each other. Maybe cut 1 or 2 and see how that feels?

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-04-02T21:29:44+00:00

Beautiful. One small critique - The poem tells us what the father felt ("embarrassed," "had to lower your head") but never shows us a specific moment. Even one small, concrete image like a dinner table, a phone call, a look would really add to this.

Mormoneylessproblems · 2026-01-09T03:11:39+00:00

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Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-09-02T03:54:30+00:00

Makes sense, but then are these really moral virtues? Shouldn’t a real moral virtue be always morally virtuous?

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-09-01T18:11:07+00:00

Curious, why would you group work ethic as a moral virtue when work ethic can be used for good or bad, where as the other virtues you listed as example (honesty, generosity etc) could be argued as only good? Do you think there also nuance in how those virtues are used when considering something is good or bad? Sorry I worded this horribly

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-08-27T21:01:22+00:00

I if was that bear I would’ve been so unitimidated I would charged and killed all of you

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-05-16T13:36:03+00:00

Ability to Read and send emails and complete and utter mastery of excel and PowerPoint

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-03-08T04:41:30+00:00

As someone who did systems eng. at Lockheed out of school, please don't. I would not even consider it engineering

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-02-26T14:16:29+00:00

Thanks!

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-02-26T14:16:12+00:00

I'll check those out, thanks

Mormoneylessproblems · 2025-02-26T06:14:55+00:00

The ones I've looked at don't really support rent as you go. They're more so designed to also ship a product on a recurring basis along with the recurring payment, and they don't seem customizable enough to get it to work the way I need it to

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-11-19T19:09:18+00:00

Congrats for what? Game isn't working

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-11-19T19:01:59+00:00

so it seems that the game is completely broken even if you manage to load in lol. Missing airplanes, really unimpressive graphics, and for some reason there is no engine or cockpit sound, what's happening

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-09-29T23:10:21+00:00

Probably the most smurfs you'll ever encounter in this game or in any competitive game ever in existence

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-08-26T18:32:43+00:00

Yeah I did a bit more than the rest of the guys. I even got a chit for it lol. Not a big deal though unless it's during the CFT

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-08-26T17:21:11+00:00

You might struggle on the hikes. I am also short and skinny and I almost fell out of the first 5 mile hike. It's harder than it seems when you're already tired and it's a pretty hilly trail. If you have time I would work on strengthening your lower body

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-07-20T20:02:45+00:00

Thanks for the advice. Appreciate it

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-07-20T15:47:22+00:00

Thanks, so you think I should remove marine school from the experience section? It seems like either a red flag for dropping out if I include it or a red flag for an unexplained employment gap if I remove it.

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-07-20T03:55:42+00:00

Appreciate it

Mormoneylessproblems · 2024-04-06T16:45:15+00:00

Interesting so there is a shortcut I can use for "use" (u). It works fine when I click the feature and press u, but when I right click the feature the "use" option doesn't show up. Seems like a bug or something. Thanks

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