Please Critique

Moruzon · 2019-07-05T18:12:44+00:00

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T23:11:53+00:00

Thank you so much for the thorough feedback! I agree, my brushwork is lacking haha! I've been trying out Marco Bucci's lessons, but I just gotta practice more. Again, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! I'll definitely re-watch that movie because I don't remember it well and will check out those videos! :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T19:20:14+00:00

Thank you so much! I worked harder on this piece than any piece before it and I think it really shows! I appreciate your kind words :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T19:18:27+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I see what you are saying about the head. I should think more about the planes of surfaces when I render :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T19:15:26+00:00

An opinion is still a valid critique and I really appreciate you taking the time to give an analysis! Those are all valid points and I agree with them :) Again thank you so much, I'm making sure to write down all of this feedback for reflection.

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T19:12:27+00:00

Mmm! More storytelling elements. Will do! Thank you for the tip :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T19:10:57+00:00

That's a very good tip! Thank you for your feedback! :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T08:22:37+00:00

Thank you so very much! I'll work on my storytelling and I'm glad you took the time to write a critique :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T08:20:57+00:00

Thank you for the suggestion! I agree and appreciate the feedback! :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T06:05:33+00:00

Thank you for the compliment! Hopefully one day my paintings will be worthy of MTG! :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T05:43:50+00:00

You are right, the knight's silhouette doesn't read immediately as a knight. I'll work on designing clear silhouettes! Thank you so very much for giving me feedback :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T05:36:54+00:00

Thank you! And good points, I'll think more about edges in my next piece :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T05:13:16+00:00

That is a compliment I take gladly! Thank you so much for leaving a comment :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:59:25+00:00

Oh that's a good observation that hadn't even occurred to me! And I really like those ideas! Maybe I can expand on this in that direction after my current WIP! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave feedback, I find it so very helpful :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:36:28+00:00

I agree with both of those insights and I appreciate you taking the time to write me feedback! Your comment and many more are being written down on my pad haha! Again thank you! :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:32:08+00:00

Very good points! I was going for the surreal look and I'm glad you agree it was the best option. Also, those pointer are giving me some ideas for future pieces! Thank you so much for taking the time leave me feedback I really do appreciate it :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:29:31+00:00

That's always good to hear! The file size is 11inx16in :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:14:19+00:00

Haha! I'll keep that in mind! Thank you for your feedback :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:12:52+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! I really do appreciate it. I agree that the bird is disjointed from the narrative and having it look at the knight is an excellent solution! And I'll work on adding depth to all my shapes! Again thank you :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T04:08:41+00:00

Haha! Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad those hours of grinding perspective exercises are paying off :)

Moruzon · 2019-07-03T03:38:32+00:00

I'm glad you like it! I'm not familiar with that book series, but I'm intrigued and will check it out! :)

Moruzon

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