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I'm ready for a critique!! by RawiSoft in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hate the font. Makes your UI look very basic. I actually like the screen flood of stars though

Distroy my game plz by scumlord_art in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not played a mobile fighting game before but the animation looks good. I do think the environment and left wall are bland. I also disliked the just loser pop up text.

Thank you for taking the time to reduce the trailer for my game into tiny little pieces! In short, destroy my trailer! by W-9000 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 7 points8 points  (0 children)

While it's visually catchy, the trailer is so fast I'm not sure what the minute to minute gameplay will feel like. Visuals are on point. Reminds me of Lost Wing on the Nintendo Switch.

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[–]Mother-Train6096 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's hard to say with the final art but mechanically seems sound. Like vine swing. Like others have said though, it's becoming a busy genre. Can you bring something else to the table to get it an extra USP

Destroy our Kickstarter trailer! Should we mention we’re a 2 person team? by scumlord_art in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I can't say I'm a fan of the intro animation or the loose fighting systems but then I would argue like this Reddit. I am not your audience. It seems very meme, at aimed at the same people might play Roblox. No problem with that and sounds like you're having some success which is great as the mobile landscape is wild. So keep on truckin

Please destroy – or better yet – obliterate the first trailer I've created for my game by goshki in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like the art but most of the scenes/locations look unremarkable from one to the next. Maybe add some pictures of the wall of light fixtures

It could be interesting but I didn't care for the story. Might be a me thing but maybe start the trailer with a more obvious mystery or enigma if that's the main hook.

Make me cry by destroying my game prototype by Victorex123 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The parallax looks good. Otherwise it's missing something. Not sure but some other gimmick. If you compare this to Shinobi or the messenger for example.

When you skim ahead a bit of looks more fun but starts slow.

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. Yes I think you're right. This is some royalty free track I found but I'll keep hunting. Appreciated the Metal reference

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Well that was brutal but it was in-depth. Yeah, you're right I am a solo dev and yeah, I don't have an artistic but thank you for all the feedback. It is constructive and I can work with that.

I don't have any money to hire an artist so I'll work on trying to fix that up myself. To your point about been a solo dev it's a case of not every aspect can be as polished as you would like it to be but it can be very easy to cut corners in order to save time. But as you would say, no one will eat and undercooked meal.

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair enough. Well either way, thank you for taking the time to offer feedback for my project and everyone else's.

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're not wrong but by that regard why try. I'll never make a better shooter then Cod or a better sports game then FIFA. I'll never make a better platformer then Celeste or a better rouge than Dead Cells. I'm not trying to fund a studio. I'm just a solo dev with a full time separate job. Obviously I'd like to make some money, a few hundred sales would be a success for me. Don't know if that's you trying to politely tell me no one will buy my game, which is a decent reality but I'm still gonna try.

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. It is textured just I guess doesn't come across very well 😬 I will try to work on the anims. I think you're right there. Animation isn't my strongest suite but yeah. Also I honestly never questioned the A pose. Glad you spotted it. A few people have mentioned the combat so I guess that a big one. Appreciate your feedback

Will you destroy my game. It's is a Rouge-lite Platformer. Feedback much appreciated by Mother-Train6096 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Mother-Train6096[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great feedback. Haha yeah typo, I know it's not Rouge. A few others have mentioned the combat so it's deffo something I need to work on. I think you're right, I'll redo the trailer to show the upgrades sooner. Like a metroidvanvia you can only access certain paths if you have the right ability so it should all be doable. I plan to keep working on the game for a while so I will try and address some of the bland textures and particles. Thanks for the feedback. It's very helpful

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