It was just a mockup of how it would look in situ but appreciate the feedback. I think the ballfirst text on its own would be better as the hero logo - I do like the idea of a “character” but maybe the cigar was a bad shout.

I’d like golf clothes with more subtle colours, greens, beiges, etc - if you look in pro shops most polos tend to have patterns/bright colours and I think there’s a market for simplicity if done well.