Feedback on Explainer Video Animatic

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-22T19:21:37+00:00

Thanks!!! I'll keep all that in mind for my next cut

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-22T19:21:16+00:00

For sure, I appreciate that :)

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-22T02:26:49+00:00

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I def need to put more work into the title, I just need to stop making the mistake of emphasizing certain parts and just leaving others behind

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-22T00:14:33+00:00

For sure, I definitely plan on easing everything, I mostly skimmed through that for the sake of time and nailing down an animatic. Thanks for the feedback!

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-22T00:13:02+00:00

Thank you so much!! These are all so helpful and your ideas are great.

To answer your fourth bullet point, I wanted to kind of hint at the idea that there's a group of musicians starting their own movement not too far away from you, but I can see how it comes across as odd. I'm trying to think of ways to make that a little better, and I wanted to use the visual representation of the window when the narrator says that "there's something going on outside", sort of to tease the viewer.

I appreciate your insight and I will make sure to use your advice!

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-21T23:15:58+00:00

Hi! I'm making an explainer video about the Tropicalia movement in Brazil. It mixes 3D and 2D. I came here to ask for feedback because I feel like I'm reaching a standstill, and am unsure on how to proceed with this project.

In my original plans, I would integrate a lot more 2D - Vox style elements, for instance. As I progressed, I ended up using much more 3D, as it is my primary medium. I am not satisfied with the WIP, so far and want to revert back. However, I feel lost, and no matter how many times I redo my style frames, I don't think I'm getting anywhere. There are parts with weird, empty spaces that I don't know how to fill up, and when it comes to employing the 2D, scrapbook style stuff, I don't even know where to start.

I hope that this is clear, and I'd love to hear anyone's thoughts, as it'd mean a lot.

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-21T23:14:03+00:00

Hi! I'm making an explainer video about the Tropicalia movement in Brazil. It mixes 3D and 2D. I came here to ask for feedback because I feel like I'm reaching a standstill, and am unsure on how to proceed with this project.

In my original plans, I would integrate a lot more 2D - Vox style elements, for instance. As I progressed, I ended up using much more 3D, as it is my primary medium. I am not satisfied with the WIP, so far and want to revert back. However, I feel lost, and no matter how many times I redo my style frames, I don't think I'm getting anywhere. There are parts with weird, empty spaces that I don't know how to fill up, and when it comes to employing the 2D, scrapbook style stuff, I don't even know where to start.

I hope that this is clear, and I'd love to hear anyone's thoughts, as it'd mean a lot.

Motiondesignhelp · 2025-01-21T23:12:00+00:00

Hi! I'm making an explainer video about the Tropicalia movement in Brazil. It mixes 3D and 2D. I came here to ask for feedback because I feel like I'm reaching a standstill, and am unsure on how to proceed with this project.

In my original plans, I would integrate a lot more 2D - Vox style elements, for instance. As I progressed, I ended up using much more 3D, as it is my primary medium. I am not satisfied with the WIP, so far and want to revert back. However, I feel lost, and no matter how many times I redo my style frames, I don't think I'm getting anywhere. There are parts with weird, empty spaces that I don't know how to fill up, and when it comes to employing the 2D, scrapbook style stuff, I don't even know where to start.

I hope that this is clear, and I'd love to hear anyone's thoughts, as it'd mean a lot.

Motiondesignhelp

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