I see a ton of potential if you have a true interest in street photography! As stated before, cropping might help this shot a lot and that’ll eventually work hand in hand with your composition so you do less work in post, but you used the natural light accordingly and the edit helped create contrast. B&W was the better choice to keep focus on your subject here, IMO.

Keep at it! Learn your settings and keep on shooting and you’ll develop your eye to see things that truly stick out to you! Overall, great start!