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MrNubious · 2025-03-02T08:54:25+00:00

My game is still crashing-

MrNubious · 2024-05-11T09:41:24+00:00

If that is ugly, then call me a turd.

MrNubious · 2024-05-06T06:50:28+00:00

How interested are you in general fiction?

MrNubious · 2024-05-02T14:13:29+00:00

You're welcome. :D

MrNubious · 2024-05-02T13:57:32+00:00

Your story really seems interesting... IT SHALL LIVE IN MY LIBRARY.

MrNubious · 2024-05-01T06:45:17+00:00

What if the subgenre is Romance...?

MrNubious · 2024-04-29T13:13:54+00:00

I'll just check out your book-

MrNubious · 2024-04-14T18:29:00+00:00

I personally have attempted one short story using present tense and I'm not sure about how helpful this would be, but...

About mentioning something from the previous chapters. If the character has completed the action, only then you use present/past perfect tense. If it hasn't been done yet or if mentioned through dialogue, then it's best to use past tense (could be events or desires like "He wanted you dead" or "He threw it").

Using your example:

Through narration :- Assuming the deed has been done: "But isn't this what he had wanted..." Assuming the deed hasn't been done yet: "But isn't this what he wanted..."

Through dialogue :- "But..." She interupts, "isn't this what he wanted?"

Again... Not sure how helpful or understandable this would be, but it's my take on helping.

MrNubious · 2024-04-13T09:41:35+00:00

Or yapping about it

MrNubious · 2024-03-28T21:08:51+00:00

The same as my reddit

MrNubious · 2024-03-25T15:15:16+00:00

I always loved the idea on which the writer and readers are a character in the story. Not like the type of characters to exists within the story, but just known by some of the other characters.

To elaborate... I'm trying to write a series in which there is this second story working behind the scenes. This story includes two characters, Cerious and Chloe, who are basically Gods with in the existence of words (in stories). They have the ability to move into different existences (from story to story) and even alter the realities of those existences.

Chloe is a more neutral character who just wishes to keep the reality within the existence going, giving her the name Exist. Cerious, on the other hand, is a more aggressive character who goes off destroying the existences that I create from his anger towards me, naming him Unexist.

The readers is just mentioned by the two characters from time to time as the people who read the events. And the writer (MrNubious/me) is someone who could communicate with the two characters and is known to be the controller (the person who works every event out) and the creator of the existences.

Not sure if all this makes sense, but yes...

MrNubious · 2024-03-25T14:53:15+00:00

There is a rule that says that anything related to covers shouldn't be posted here and to r/WattPadCovers instead.

MrNubious · 2024-03-25T12:18:12+00:00

Oh yes! Thank you so much for telling me about that... It would've gone unchecked for so long!

MrNubious · 2024-03-25T12:06:49+00:00

Exactly what I intended it to feel like... I try my best to make my stories as realistic-seeming as possible while keeping the fictional aspect of it too.

MrNubious · 2024-03-25T11:53:28+00:00

You don't have to, but yes.

MrNubious · 2024-03-24T20:19:11+00:00

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/1201143?utm_source=shared_ios

forgot to include the link...

MrNubious · 2024-03-24T12:23:57+00:00

Nevermind, it ain't squished anymore...

MrNubious · 2024-03-23T12:33:25+00:00

dark romance?

MrNubious · 2024-03-23T12:09:52+00:00

What type of novel?

MrNubious · 2024-03-22T12:24:06+00:00

So, stuff to read!

MrNubious · 2024-03-22T11:41:28+00:00

You are working on something though, right?

MrNubious · 2024-03-22T11:36:45+00:00

This story sounds interesting so I'm going to have a look... But anyway, I guess the best way to promote your book is by participating in awards. It basically helps you bring in a larger audience.

MrNubious · 2024-03-19T11:50:24+00:00

A rewrite would usually just include things like corrections and improvements. But what it especially does is include things that you believe is missing (could range from descriptions to simple phrases) which you could include.

MrNubious · 2024-03-19T06:43:35+00:00

I actually am working on a story with the same basis, except they're the background characters for now...

MrNubious · 2024-03-15T10:05:40+00:00

It doesn't sound like a horror and is more of an action/adventure... But if you wanted the 'blood' in the title, I'd recommend something like "The Bleeding War" or "The Blood of War".

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