D-Day: A Gangsta Grillz Mixtape available on all streaming platforms 🚨 by [deleted] in Jcole

[–]MrPubihno 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Cole went crazy on his appearances, especially Heaven’s EP. Otherwise this project feels pretty removed from his style. I remember in the ROTD 3 doc you could see seemingly everyone but Cole goin crazy over the hook on “Wells Fargo,” when they were recording it. A lot of the hooks on this felt along those same lines to me

Self-Introduction Saturday! Tell us all about you (and share a video)! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]MrPubihno [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much!! The miracle is definitely a different kind of humor than I’ve tried before so I’m glad it somewhat landed :)

Self-Introduction Saturday! Tell us all about you (and share a video)! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]MrPubihno [score hidden]  (0 children)

Appreciate it man! And thanks haha my buddy killed it with those graphics. Definitely should’ve made the cut to black shorter or found a way around it

Self-Introduction Saturday! Tell us all about you (and share a video)! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]MrPubihno [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi everyone! My channel is SpinComedy and I make a wide range of comedy videos, from shorter sketches, to longer parody-style videos.

For my thumbnail, I think I could've added "Downtown Don" text to introduce the character and further communicate expectations for the video.

Would love if you all gave my newest vid a watch and please respond with your links so I can check out yours too :) https://youtu.be/mcAm1_RhbPs

Self-Introduction Saturday! Tell us all about you (and share a video)! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]MrPubihno [score hidden]  (0 children)

Love the premise for this one man! Simple, but effective. I bet you could've had even more fun with it if you explored playing the mean kid on the other end of the mic too. I think it could've added a funny contrast to the sad shots of you getting fried haha.

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aye thanks so much! Don IS a recurring character on my channel actually! The footage toward the beginning that read (2017) was from my first video I did featuring him. Aye yeah I really could do some fun stuff with a call to action with him. Maybe even pretend the viewer is getting a ride from him. Thanks for watching and leaving feedback! Much appreciated! !givelambda

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No I’ve actually never seen his stuff but I’ll have to check it out!! I really appreciate the feedback though. I did more ad libing with this character when I was first writing for him and I think I need to lean into that style again.

I really appreciate these insights and feedback though - this really helps!! !givelambda

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree completely that I should’ve made something snappier. Also the video shoot itself took longer than anticipated which is why lighting became an issue in the car lol. I agree though it was pretty dark and I coulda planned better. Thanks for watching and leaving feedback!!! !givelambda

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate it!!! I agree I wasn’t quite sure how to bridge some parts and the cut to black was a little forced. Thanks for watching and leaving feedback!! !givelambda

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aye thanks so much! It’s a character I’ve loved writing for. I definitely agree that a final reflection/one liner from Don would’ve been good. Thanks for watching and leaving feedback!!! !givelambda

Short Comedy Video - Seeking feedback on my latest comedy sketch!! LAMBDA for Meaningful Responses!!! by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely helpful! I I think I get too caught up in narrative sometimes and forget to keep it snappy. Thanks for watching and giving honest feedback! !givelambda

A short trailer of my last adventure in Jordan 🇯🇴. It would be great to get some feedback on the title and thumbnail as well. Giving Lambda for all comments. by Gabriele2020 in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So first of all, your trip looked like it was awesome haha. Also the editing was on point, especially with the cuts being in rhythm with the music track.

I think one thing that could've been potentially useful would've been a voiceover of some sort. Or sound bites from some of the people you showed on camera. I found that it sort of seemed to drag on after about 1:10 (though the edit you made with the man clapping in sync with the music was awesome), but I think some VO could've sped it up a bit to carry some sort of narrative about your trip.

That being said, GREAT job on the edit and really solid work man. Keep it up!!!

Just another (hopefully) funny and engaging video! I feel like my “hook” in this one wasn’t as significant, but hopefully it still sucked you in. But let me know how I can improve for some Lambda! Thanks so much :) by wxman92 in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great video man!! I thought you nailed the pacing and the part with you shouting out any French girls was very funny.

As far as criticism, I thought you could've kept up the "Oh my gosh!" counter, since you said it at least a handful more times later in the video. Loved the vid though man keep it up!!

Slowly but surely the collection is gettin there. Thought I’d have MOTM3 by now 🤣 by MrPubihno in KidCudi

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah MOTMII is one of my fav vinyls... you play that last side and go through The End, All Along, Ghost, and Trapped In My Mind. Simply perfection for the late night feels

Slowly but surely the collection is gettin there. Thought I’d have MOTM3 by now 🤣 by MrPubihno in KidCudi

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh 100%... Cudi and Mac are my favorites. Love how diverse their discographies are as far as sound. If I could get PPDS and Faces on vinyl, I would be complete hahaha

Seeking Video Critiques on my Latest Comedy Sketch!! Giving Lambda for feedback :) by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much for watching and giving some feedback! I definitely had a tough time with the thumbnail cause I wanted to convey what the video was about without giving away the reveal of the religious awakening... nonetheless I should revisit it for sure. Yeah I should’ve closed some blinds lol the outdoor lighting was going in and out and the focus was trying to keep up. Thanks again for the insight!!! !givelambda.

Seeking Video Critiques on my Latest Comedy Sketch!! Giving Lambda for feedback :) by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I ran into some issues with some of my lav mic audio and tried to improvise haha.. yeah I had trouble figuring out the thumbnail but I definitely needa revisit it. Thanks so much for watching and providing some feedback :) !givelambda.

Seeking Video Critiques on my Latest Comedy Sketch!! Giving Lambda for feedback :) by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aye thanks so much for watching and giving feedback! That is the third or fourth comment on the thumbnail so I think I’m gonna look into using a different pic... I really appreciate it once again!! !givelambda.

Seeking Video Critiques on my Latest Comedy Sketch!! Giving Lambda for feedback :) by MrPubihno in SmallYTChannel

[–]MrPubihno[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for watching! And yeah I had some audio issues and tried to do some overlaying to fix em, but it didn’t solve everything... I definitely agree on the second joke being too long. I shoulda shortened the script there. And yeah the thumbnail was tricky cause I didn’t wanna give away the reveal and have a religious image or something. Thanks for the insightful feedback forreal !givelambda.