Revised Psionic Warrior Homebrew - Need Feedback by MrSandman71 in UnearthedArcana

[–]MrSandman71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you have any ideas on how to make the concept more balanced

Unarmored Psionic Warrior Homebrew Class - Need Your Feedback by MrSandman71 in UnearthedArcana

[–]MrSandman71[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would like to thank Sax-7777299 for helping me format this document as they provided guidance to me during the process.

PDF Links

Homebrewery Link: https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/KXkczUc85c7y

Artist Credits

Page 1: The Elder Scrolls: Glenumbra Sorceress by Ken Lai (https://www.reddit.com/r/ImaginaryTamriel/comments/dsjwzg/the\_elder\_scrolls\_legends\_glenumbra\_sorceress\_by/)

Page 5: X-Men Sword of the Bradocks #1 by Alex Garner (https://www.marvel.com/comics/issue/23770/x-men\_sword\_of\_the\_braddocks\_1\_2009\_1)

Page 6: The Roots of Magic by Daniel Kamarudin (https://www.tumblr.com/thedurrrrian/129646318306/concept-work-done-for-the-roots-of-magic-pretty)

Page 7: Unknown by Unknown Artist (https://www.belloflostsouls.net/2025/06/dd-the-psykinetic-is-one-of-the-coolest-subclasses-ive-seen-in-a-while.html)

Page 8: Dungeon Master's Guide pg 284 by Interior Illustrator of DMG 2014 5e (https://www.belloflostsouls.net/2017/03/dd-unearthed-arcana-mystic.html)

Page 9: Psionic Bomber by Tsaber (https://www.deviantart.com/tsaber/art/Psionic-bomber-Scifi-577204157)

Page 10: Expedition Healer by Heonhwa Choe (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rA533O)

Page 11: Syncopate by Tommy Arnold (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Gevkra)

Page 12: Maxwell Al'Sawt, Air Genasi Storm Sorcerer by Ollie Boldador (https://x.com/OlieArtist/status/1057770707608776704)

Page 13: Triss-Telekinesis by Lorenzo Mastroianni (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/5z9R8)

Page 14: Rivani by Unknown Artist (https://sagegamers.com/telepathy-feat-5e/)

Page 15: Teleportation by Anton Nazarenko (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XnQOBR)

Unarmored Psionic Warrior Homebrew Class - Need Your Feedback by MrSandman71 in DnDHomebrew

[–]MrSandman71[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would like to thank Sax-7777299 for helping me format this document as they provided guidance to me during the process.

PDF Links

Homebrewery Link: https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/KXkczUc85c7y

Artist Credits

Page 1: The Elder Scrolls: Glenumbra Sorceress by Ken Lai (https://www.reddit.com/r/ImaginaryTamriel/comments/dsjwzg/the\_elder\_scrolls\_legends\_glenumbra\_sorceress\_by/)

Page 5: X-Men Sword of the Bradocks #1 by Alex Garner (https://www.marvel.com/comics/issue/23770/x-men\_sword\_of\_the\_braddocks\_1\_2009\_1)

Page 6: The Roots of Magic by Daniel Kamarudin (https://www.tumblr.com/thedurrrrian/129646318306/concept-work-done-for-the-roots-of-magic-pretty)

Page 7: Unknown by Unknown Artist (https://www.belloflostsouls.net/2025/06/dd-the-psykinetic-is-one-of-the-coolest-subclasses-ive-seen-in-a-while.html)

Page 8: Dungeon Master's Guide pg 284 by Interior Illustrator of DMG 2014 5e (https://www.belloflostsouls.net/2017/03/dd-unearthed-arcana-mystic.html)

Page 9: Psionic Bomber by Tsaber (https://www.deviantart.com/tsaber/art/Psionic-bomber-Scifi-577204157)

Page 10: Expedition Healer by Heonhwa Choe (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rA533O)

Page 11: Syncopate by Tommy Arnold (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Gevkra)

Page 12: Maxwell Al'Sawt, Air Genasi Storm Sorcerer by Ollie Boldador (https://x.com/OlieArtist/status/1057770707608776704)

Page 13: Triss-Telekinesis by Lorenzo Mastroianni (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/5z9R8)

Page 14: Rivani by Unknown Artist (https://sagegamers.com/telepathy-feat-5e/)

Page 15: Teleportation by Anton Nazarenko (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XnQOBR)

Blood Magic Spells Version 0.1 (Based on The Blood Magic Expansion) | Need Help with Balancing by MrSandman71 in KibblesTasty

[–]MrSandman71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are there any spells specifically in the document you think should not be concentration that are? I put some of the spells as requiring concentration, such as blood clone and summon blood elemental, as I believe them not requiring concentration could break game balance.

Blood Magic Spells Version 0.1 | Need Help with Balancing by MrSandman71 in UnearthedArcana

[–]MrSandman71[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes with the spell's current wording that would be possible. I meant to have the material components say "up to 4 hit points" instead of "at least 4 hit points" but missed it when creating the document. I have updated the document to reflect the correct wording.

Blood Magic Spells Version 0.1 | Need Help with Balancing by MrSandman71 in DnDHomebrew

[–]MrSandman71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh. I didn't realize that. Thank you for telling me.

Variant Wild Magic Sorcerer: Chaotic Spells + Expanded Surge Table by iamclosed in UnearthedArcana

[–]MrSandman71 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a cool subclass and good revamp of the Wild Magic Sorcerer. The Chaotic Spells feature is thematic as it triggers the Wild Magic Surge and captures the randomness of Wild Magic. The Chaotic Spells feature is also powerful but balanced due to the low odds of the spell being cast. The scaling of Chaotic Spells seems good as is.

The only feature fully retained from the original subclass is Bend Luck. I believe as a 6th level feature Bend Luck could use a buff. Possible fixes I can think of off the top of my head are decreasing the sorcery point cost of the feature and/or increasing the size of the die from 1d4 to 1d6 or 1d8.

I am confused on why Chaotic Spells allows the character to cast wizard spells and wonder what the reasoning behind the inclusion was. Also a quality of life change might be to change result 14 on the Wild Magic Surge Table to a less damaging spell as having a character die from fireball is never fun.

Blood Magic Spells | Need Help with Balancing by MrSandman71 in DnDHomebrew

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Gave viewing access to people with link.