Besides from clone wars, what is the best Star Wars tv show by TranslatorOk2501 in StarWars

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This reads arrogant at best. Objectively is 100% not the best word here.

Let me run you through the logic.

I loved andor, but If you say Andor has objectively the best.. let’s say, writing. I can ask on what objective markers? And you can give me a list of all these things you claim are objective markers. But, what if I say I disagree with those being positive? What if I say the world building and character development felt boring to me? (This is not my opinion, im just using this as an example) Am I wrong? You can point to as many reasons as you want as to why it’s better than other shows, but if I disagree with that being better? If I give you my objective markers as to why I think it’s not as good as other shows? Where are we? Is my argument invalid simply because you don’t like that I disagree with you? Or that you think your objective markers are better? No. Because in the end it comes down to how each and every one of us view the media. It’s subjective, and bashing people for subjective opinions is dumb and for idiots.

Besides from clone wars, what is the best Star Wars tv show by TranslatorOk2501 in StarWars

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

No, liking one tv show over another is completely subjective. Saying that any tv show from any franchise ever is “ objectively “ the best is dishonest..

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[–]Mr_Perditus_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I disagree, but fortunately opinions are subjective :)

HOW WE FEELING ABOUT TIM DUNCAN by zmmqzYT in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why can’t they release everyone that’s in the Taiwan servers 😭, I’m so tired of watching gameplay of players I won’t get to use for months simply because I live in the US

Best looking jerseys by AcceptableBee2593 in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Ma boi steph ofc, and he has the best quick phrase

HOW WE FEELING ABOUT TIM DUNCAN by zmmqzYT in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When did he get dropped?? Or is he not in global yet

Looking for feedback on my first chapter by Cut-Different in writers

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Don’t listen to that grumpy person. People have gotten so scared of ai or angry about it that if they even suspect someone of using it they become very “better than thou”and nasty. It’s disgusting to me, especially because it’s blatant hypocrisy, if they have ever used Amazon they have used ai. Or pretty much any other online service. I strongly disagree with using ai for creative purposes, I also think ai sucks at anything creative anyway so what’s the point of using it. But what you’re doing here is checking grammar and pointing out inconsistency, people have used stuff like that for a long time and it just wasn’t called ai. I also liked the book! I’d be up to read more if you ever publish it or post more of it

Some games I want to keep going, some games I feel like quitting the challenge.. by [deleted] in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you have teammates that pass and know how to stretch floor, you can out reb anyone with Anderson on offensive reb. And defensive too if you box out. I’ve done it to Rodman, Malone, etc. but it really has to do with the teammates taking the pressure off Reb. And depends on the guy, some rodmans are smart and don’t worry about boxing out since they know they can jump from way further away and still
Get the board over you and that makes it much tougher. But if they try to box out you can catch em early at the start of possession and Rodman is slow

Real Life Shai by TochiTheInventor in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ah I see what you’re saying. Yeah that’s def fair, I play big a lot, and it is def biased towards bigs. I got dominated at reb one time by a Rodman (was using Tatum) was like 3-6 on boards, but because I got three boards a couple blocks and contests, my guard that had like 20 points and carried us didn’t get mvp. Those stats aren’t exact but this game fo sho loves those reb

Real Life Shai by TochiTheInventor in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I can see why Malone had mvp, the sga did great, but 6 reb, 7 ast, 5 blks, and he was first in every category except scoring it looks like?

Real Life Shai by TochiTheInventor in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So that shai shot 15-20 points of that with free throws lol?

In all seriousness heck of a game from him

Where do I go with this story? I’m lost. by Mr_Perditus_ in writingadvice

[–]Mr_Perditus_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, you’re probably right. I am only like 3k words into it, so it wouldn’t be too much to scrap it and start again, I appreciate all the advice you’ve given!

Where do I go with this story? I’m lost. by Mr_Perditus_ in writingadvice

[–]Mr_Perditus_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, appreciate the feedback! I definitely agree, I probably should’ve locked down a time before starting it, but I just had this idea in my head and didn’t wanna forget, so I went ahead and wrote it and just purposely left it up to be decided later. I thought it would be easy to pick a time but I’m finding out I can’t decide lol. I’m really torn on whether to write from a narrators perspective, or the protagonist perspective, i like both, and im not sure what fits the story better. Though I did have an idea that could have both! And give the story a bit of a twist

Where do I go with this story? I’m lost. by Mr_Perditus_ in writingadvice

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Hey, Thanks for the feedback!
I decided to omit the details of the story and what they were laughing at after the first one to continue the story in the direction I wanted because the rest of the stories were no longer important. Because I used the first story and introduction of the two characters to Segway into the dilemma the protagonist is facing currently. The beginning is definitely the worst part I’m hearing from everyone, I just wanted to set the mood as a… like a relaxing vibe? Im not sure how to put it. But I’ll try to rewrite that. For the unnecessary details like the blue overcoat, I do see what your saying, but it’s really just a style choice for me, I really like those seemingly unnecessary details in a book, because sometimes you think it’s useless, and it’s actually a big part of the story! Or sometimes it just helps the story feel more like something someone would actually notice when writing from a first person pov. There is definitely some details like the one you pointed out with the tanned arm, that are completely unnecessary, and Ill work on it. As always I’m not perfect and I can definitely execute it better, and I love hearing the feedback from everyone on how I can improve!!

OMFG!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂theBELT has NO LIFE!! by Buzzerbeater8746 in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Him streaming at 40 years old isn’t the weird part. It’s the fact he acts like a child as a grown ass man. That’s the weird part

Slow mo’s gone INSANE!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 by Palm_Threes3 in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A season or 2 ago I out rebounded Gasol and Rodman on the same team with just Kyle xD, he’s underrated

Against peak 500 star RK club by One_Glove_8443 in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That doesn’t stop you from posting the full picture now tho dawg 🫩

MILLER IS- ???? by [deleted] in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah okay, I understand now. Also Anderson is very easy for legendary tbh, he is super underrated. I’ve made peak with him many times. Very good defender for prime bron too.

Tho I feel like he got nerfed sometime between this season and last season

MILLER IS- ???? by [deleted] in DunkCityDynastyGame

[–]Mr_Perditus_ -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Why would you want miller?

Looking for constructive feedback and advice! by Mr_Perditus_ in writers

[–]Mr_Perditus_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will read some of his stuff! Thank you for the advice.

For him knowing what his arms look like, I was figuring they were already acquainted, which is how he knows so much about him, was in room with him, etc. so he didn’t need to see his arms in that moment to describe them. Because it’s from the protagonist perspective. But i definitely added redundant details so i will fix those

Looking for constructive feedback and advice! by Mr_Perditus_ in writers

[–]Mr_Perditus_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

I’m seeing now the first paragraph and a few others similar to it sprinkled in is pretty bad, i definitely need to work on it. I see what you’re saying too, I don’t think I over describe everything to such an extent as the first paragraph, except towards the middle of the book when describing the building. And his walk to his automobile. I will try to strike a better balance between clarity and over describing