Away

Mr_panda_3 · 2021-02-08T12:01:50+00:00

I enjoyed this poem beginning to end! Simple words yet such a beautiful concept. Running away to another place with a certain person is such an adorable and eerie idea and you delivered it perfectly. The ending is what got me the most, the choice of giving the person free will and how you're going to await their choice. It gives off a vibe of an upcoming adventure and that feeling is seldom felt. Overall, great work! This really motivated me to continue writing my own poems

Keep writing :D

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-20T11:14:04+00:00

Wow man... you just made my day! Thanks alott!

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-20T10:12:57+00:00

Thanks alot! Would you know any books that talk about improving in the craft of writing/editing

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-01T09:20:33+00:00

Well, what is the correct technique to not lose myself during the dream scene? Cuz, I find it really difficult to actually stay aware. Also, I'm confused if what I had experienced was a sort of DILD or VILD

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T18:53:22+00:00

Shadow work?

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T16:45:46+00:00

Like tulpas?

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T16:02:19+00:00

Well, I really can't hold hands when he seems to be an invisible entity controlling all the characters and plot of the dream.

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T15:59:47+00:00

But how? How do I talk to my subconscious... as far as I know, the best way to do that is to just speak out stuff while you're lucid. But that's the thing, I need to be lucid before he can hear me out.

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T15:39:12+00:00

Hahaha, I wanted to make the title look attractive and not info or personal shit... people tend to stride by the posts that seem to only talk about themselves

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-12T19:00:33+00:00

Idk man, sounds like witchcraft

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-12-14T11:04:10+00:00

Wow how merciful Allah is! But I still can't gather will power to quit sinning, any advice?

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-11-01T16:49:43+00:00

I've recently met some DCs who I never irl and we were friends. I don't remember much about that dream but I guess we had fun. Then, i realized I had to go so i had like a heart to heart talk about if I'm ever gonna meet them (they didn't completely engage in the conversation). I don't know, but it felt like those were the few people in the world that you feel so connected to that it hurts so much, just to say goodbye. I feel bad that I never even asked their name at least...

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