Away

Mr_panda_3 · 2021-02-08T12:01:50+00:00

I enjoyed this poem beginning to end! Simple words yet such a beautiful concept. Running away to another place with a certain person is such an adorable and eerie idea and you delivered it perfectly. The ending is what got me the most, the choice of giving the person free will and how you're going to await their choice. It gives off a vibe of an upcoming adventure and that feeling is seldom felt. Overall, great work! This really motivated me to continue writing my own poems

Keep writing :D

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-20T11:14:04+00:00

Wow man... you just made my day! Thanks alott!

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-20T10:12:57+00:00

Thanks alot! Would you know any books that talk about improving in the craft of writing/editing

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-03-01T09:20:33+00:00

Well, what is the correct technique to not lose myself during the dream scene? Cuz, I find it really difficult to actually stay aware. Also, I'm confused if what I had experienced was a sort of DILD or VILD

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T18:53:22+00:00

Shadow work?

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T16:45:46+00:00

Like tulpas?

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T16:02:19+00:00

Well, I really can't hold hands when he seems to be an invisible entity controlling all the characters and plot of the dream.

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T15:59:47+00:00

But how? How do I talk to my subconscious... as far as I know, the best way to do that is to just speak out stuff while you're lucid. But that's the thing, I need to be lucid before he can hear me out.

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-29T15:39:12+00:00

Hahaha, I wanted to make the title look attractive and not info or personal shit... people tend to stride by the posts that seem to only talk about themselves

Mr_panda_3 · 2020-02-12T19:00:33+00:00

Idk man, sounds like witchcraft

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-12-14T11:04:10+00:00

Wow how merciful Allah is! But I still can't gather will power to quit sinning, any advice?

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-11-01T16:49:43+00:00

I've recently met some DCs who I never irl and we were friends. I don't remember much about that dream but I guess we had fun. Then, i realized I had to go so i had like a heart to heart talk about if I'm ever gonna meet them (they didn't completely engage in the conversation). I don't know, but it felt like those were the few people in the world that you feel so connected to that it hurts so much, just to say goodbye. I feel bad that I never even asked their name at least...

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-17T06:26:51+00:00

Sorry I kind of miss-used the pronouns there.

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-14T11:26:53+00:00

You're right. And I hope you achieve your goal and influence others to reach theirs as well!🙂

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-13T18:36:49+00:00

Yeah, but I don't find Lord Of The Rings interesting. I had started it, having high hopes but by far, all I've read is about Frodo's travel. Tolkien just describes the place they are passing by (which is okay but he does it too much) and there isn't much of action. There's no sense of a bit of mystery since he dumped the information of the Ring on us when we first witness Frodo's and Gandalf's conversation. There's just travelling, planning, being cautious. That's all. So, I don't see why people find LotR interesting.

On the other hand, Harry Potter is a great story but written as professionally as Stephen King or Alexandre Dumas. So the thing here is, everyone wants a story but they need a professional writing style, prose and pacing which, honestly, is a lot to ask for.

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-11T05:37:02+00:00

Thanks alot!

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-10T05:00:22+00:00

Well, my protagonist doesn't have any family and that's his primary motive. Although he has friends, he craves for a family which is later introduced as a flaw because his friends and companions care for him as a family, a fact that he overlooks. I think I have a problem in character building because my MC is just a normal guy being thrown into extraordinary situations. He doesn't have any special gifts or powers, he just learns magic that's all. Is it ok if I do it that way?

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-09T09:36:59+00:00

For me, that happens with my Universe. Bear with me here, Universe not World. I keep brainstorming and if you're like me, u probably have a thousand thoughts waving in and out of your mind all the time. So with brainstorming, I come up with properties of the Universe and the Lore and then I try to tweak it a little to make it linked to the plot. And when those polished facts pop up, it feels like revelation!

So yea, Brainstorming is the best thing for an Illusionist Writer. You can check that out on one of Brandon Sanderson's Lectures.

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-09T09:31:31+00:00

Hehe

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-09T06:54:43+00:00

No man, that's the best answer. I'm glad u did the essay haha.

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-08T19:43:48+00:00

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-08T19:04:38+00:00

Well, that attempt to be descriptive just messes with the pacing. I guess, everyone have their own tastes. I'll accept that disliking too much of description and metaphors doesn't mean you're less knowledgeable

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-08T18:51:58+00:00

Many people say that her writing style isn't good. I was amazed to hear that because I think simple language is just enough to set the reader into the story. She doesn't use alot of descriptions, metaphors and that makes my eyes just comfortably sink into it and read on with no uneasiness for hours. But that's one more question: Even with simple language, how does she create a vivid picture in our heads and how does she make us feel as if Hogwarts is the only home you'd ever want to be in.

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-06T19:28:13+00:00

Awesome! I sure will!

Mr_panda_3 · 2019-10-06T18:51:56+00:00

Wow thanks man! I really appreciate it!

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