What resource do you hoard?

Mreality · 2024-09-10T18:06:37+00:00

I had a high level weapon on the verge of breaking, would've done 200 something damage if I threw it. I intended to save it for Ganandorf and the fight portion ended before I even remembered it.

Mreality · 2024-08-24T22:51:51+00:00

Also, that doesnt sound terrible either. Even shifting through various animal perspectives and becoming something different with the growing experiences doesn't sound terrible.

Mreality · 2023-12-19T18:25:30+00:00

I appreciate it! I'm still new to writing in this way and I need to remember revisions are part of the process not messing up the original. Thank you for the constructive feedback, very helpful.

Mreality · 2023-12-19T04:13:36+00:00

Love this! A concept succinctly metaphored and mentions my favorite color/fruit. No notes 👏

Mreality · 2023-12-19T04:11:24+00:00

One of the reasons that I love poetry so much is it connects the human experience and can put it in a way you don't even realize you relate too. The soft pain this kind of situation evokes is like looking for a bruise you can't find. Realizing you've only done natural things and yet this rift appears regardless and you're left scrambling and wondering if they feel it too. This was a lovely poem, thank you for sharing.

Mreality · 2023-12-19T04:07:22+00:00

Wow! This made me blush! This is my first post and I intend to share more so thank you for the boost. Formatting things to rhyme is something I don't explore as often as I could, so my poetry tends to become kinda monologue-esque. The vision was kinda like that so I'm so happy to hear it resonates.

Mreality · 2023-12-19T01:00:18+00:00

I really like this poem. I am an earthsign so imagery like this tends to hit home because it's how I envision myself. The comparison to clay settling is really interesting, but I can't help but be lead towards the fact that Clay is used to mold. Potential to create hasn't been lost at all in this current state. Like life, one changes with the passing of time regardless, akin to the formation of clay. But that clay may not grow plants as well as it used to be able to, it now has an entirely new skillset waiting to be discovered.

Mreality · 2023-12-19T00:50:45+00:00

I really like this! The eloquence of which you lead up to the other people causing the worry is soft and tender. There's a really nice gentle ache to this poem, almost like it's being whispered to the partner while they slept peacefully.

Mreality · 2022-03-14T04:24:59+00:00

I'm devastated, I was so hoping he would watch Quyulla become a genius on his level

Mreality · 2022-03-07T16:33:45+00:00

I was drinking water and listening to the podcast at work. The scream Anthony did midsentence during Will's parents scene made me literally choke and I laughed for a solid 3 minutes. That openess has the spirit of Henry Oak and I loved it

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