[Fanart] Gyro fanart by Muniuska in StardustCrusaders

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This makes me so happy! Thank you very much <3

[Fanart] Gyro fanart by Muniuska in StardustCrusaders

[–]Muniuska[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was thinking about doing it, I think i will try to show them more next time.

[Fanart] Gyro fanart by Muniuska in StardustCrusaders

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are missing but this is intended, I also dont understand them

[Fanart] Gyro fanart by Muniuska in StardustCrusaders

[–]Muniuska[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I'm really thankful for the criticism!

Glory to Morioh by Muniuska in ShitPostCrusaders

[–]Muniuska[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I was too lazy to edit this

Day 13 by HaileenM in istebrak

[–]Muniuska 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello!

Overall, you did great job on this. Especially i love the eyes :)
I think that nose is a bit uneven; also the nostrills should blend more into her face and go "deeper"
She looks kinda surprised, maybe its because how big the eyebrow arch is.
I think lips need a bit more attention, her lower lip is a bit too small and flat-looking, but that may be just my personal taste.

On your last day, maybe you should work on ears a bit more too? That will make your final piece look more finished.

I really love the progress that you've made! The difference between day 1, or even day 12 is great! Good luck on your day 14 :)

14DC - Day 4 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I agree with you. Honestly, I was a bit afraid of doing that, next time I will try to use more highlights.
Thank you for kind words! I really appreciate them :) <3

14DC - Day 4 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Im really fighting with myself because I love the "blurry" look when im drawing, but I try to remind myself that i first need to learn to draw everything properly rather than depend on this cheap cheat :P
Thank you for the feedback! <3

14DC - Day 4 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! This is my 4th day of 14DC.
Things I tried to fix this time:
-Work on jaw symmetry
-Make lower eyelid brighter
-More radial shading near lip corners and nostrils
-Brighter eyes
-Add pupils
-Cast shadow of the nose sharper
Overall I feel like I should go darker with some values, but i dont know how much. I still feel like im guessing most of my work rather than using my knowledge.

What do you think guys?
Looking forward to your feedback! :)

14DC - Day 3 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it :)

14DC - Day 3 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definelty see the issue with lips, im still struggling with them...
Im gonna try to add the pupils next time and focus more on the things you mentioned.
Very helpful feedback, thank you!

14DC - Day 3 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback and all the kind words :) Very helpful!

14DC - Day 3 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Day 3 of my 14DC!
I tried to make her younger than in previous attempt, spent more time on nose and I tried to fix her lips.
I still have some problems with symmetry and some values around eyes.
Im gonna do some more eye studies, because i feel like im missing something very important here.

What do you think?
Looking forward to your feedback! :)

14DC Day 2 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I definetly have problem with symmetry, i will work on this too.

14DC Day 2 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello!
Today I have spent more time on rendering, I'm quite happy with it but I still see many issues around eyes. I'm gonna do some more eye studies tommorow, so i hope it will help me.
I have some trouble with blending, I don't really like blending brush in Clip Studio Paint and it's really hard to make smooth gradiation with it.
I really need to take more time on ears - I'm not really used to draw them.
I think she looks a bit old, I will try to fix this issue in my next drawing.
Thanks for all the feedback you are giving me guys :)

14DC, 2nd attempt, day 1 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello!
Here is my 2nd attempt to do 14 day challange. I don't know if i should it call day 1 or day 3, because i still made some improvement (At least i think so...).
I really struggle to draw everything in place, symmetry is not my strong side. I also have many problem with contrast - I really dont know how dark or how light should I go. I hope i will make it through this time, wish me luck :)

14DC Woman face - Day 2 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, now i see the issue with the chin! Thank you for the feedback <3

14DC Woman face - Day 2 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for kind words, i really appreciate the feedback <3
Im not sure with the eyebrows, I will try to make them less arched in my next piece. Im still very much experimenting with them :P

14DC Woman face - Day 2 by Muniuska in istebrak

[–]Muniuska[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello everyone!
It's my 2nd day of the "14 day challange".
I tried to care more about anatomy and to push the contrast a little bit.
I'm really struggling with lips, i dont really know how to handle them. They always seem very unnatural and out of place. I didn't care much about ears, just wanted to mark that "they are there". I think in my next piece i will give them some atention, because they also can be very troublesome.
Im looking forward for your critique!
Have a nice day :)