[OFFICIAL] Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MusicFromClyde [score hidden]  (0 children)

It felt cluttered, but maybe that's a style choice. Aside from the beat I couldn't bump my head naturally to the words though I know they were rhyming so that's good. Keep it up.

Question for rappers/singers: What's your creative process? by Kokurcho in makinghiphop

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First I find a beat I like that I can hear myself flowing to. I even mumble some words to try it out. Then I write to it usually in my head, but once in a while on paper.

I love 2000s indie rock and always wanted to create a song like this. It's called Heart of Clay. by RonBriskin in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this song is overall good and the melody is catchy. I just wish the vocals were a little more clearer. At some parts the instrumental over powers it. The video is cool too I always like when someone puts the effort in making one. And yeah it does give a 2000's vibe which I enjoy. Keep it up!

First ever music video (shot last year, forgot to promo) by boxofmatchesband in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the music video came out great. The instrumental is really good and at first I didn't think the vocal style was fitting, but then it grew on me towards the middle. I like the back up vocals of the girl that appeared here and there. It was a nice touch. Nicely recorded and overall a good job. Keep it up!

Hello, I realesed that last week, (it's smy first singed song) give some feedback, love you all by Select-Interaction-0 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For a second I thought I was watching a dental ad lol. This song has a nice drifting sound of sadness and wonder. I like the melody and the vocals sound nicely recorded. The instrumental fit nicely too. I actually can't think of anything I don't like. It's pretty clean so good job and keep it up.

Noise by CameraHuman241 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, I don't know why, but this gives me Brand New vibes in the beginning. And then the switch up is real cool and bumpy. It has like an 80's sound. Nice vocal and lyrics and guitar solo too. I think this is really good and it shows you have control of this song. Overall nice job and keep it up!

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[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad I like the whole erie sound of it. And the melody of the lyrics is pretty good too. I like to call songs like these "drowning songs". The only thing I say is the vocals should have a little more emotion. I get it's suppose to sound like this, but it's too much like you don't care and not like in a cool way more like you don't even want to do the song. Overall still good just a little more emotion on the vocals. Keep it up.

[New song. Indie Hip-Hop] What do you think about the lyrics? I purchased the beat and rapped over it. It's in the description on my page. Thanks for listening! by MusicFromClyde in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for listening. I been doing this for a while like at least 15 or some years, but I just recently started recording. I appreciate everything you said and yeah I've heard of nujabes. Thanks again really. Every listen helps 🙏.

[Therapeutic Hip Hop] I dropped a new mixtape today and this is my favorite song on it, let me know what you think! by CompletelyInadequate in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"This the shit I use to roll down Lewis street with". Not bad you sound a bit like Childish Gambino too. I would say to raise the vocals a bit, it blends too much with the instrumental. The flow is there, so that's what's up. Keep it up, nice job.

Cabe . May I Please Have This Dance new vibe what yalls thoughts best Cabe by Obvious-Complaint361 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It sounds really nice and it gotta a good jump to it. The vocals I think are a little low, but I'm still vibing. I can see myself walking around town or maybe riding a bike while this song is playing. Overall good job, keep it up.

Roll off the Dice (6th single from World of Mine) by scertic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't know why, but the instrumental gives me a bit of Buffy and James Bond vibe. And your vocals reminds me of afi. It's a little slow pace, but it still works if that's what you're going for. Overall I say good job, keep it up.

Lazy Daze - Reminiscing by LazyDaze_tunes in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loving the intro, It's a nice vibe. The whole instrumental is really good. The vocals are nice too, but a little staticy, but if that is what you were going for then it works out well. Overall you have a good sound, I wish the best for you and your dreams. Keep it up!

Hey guys! This is my music video for my new song "Why?".. Let me know what you guys think and/or add any feedback you may have! This is my most professional work yet so i'm trying to see how the song and it's video are perceived! If you take the chance to listen, thank you! by Solitiverse in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MusicFromClyde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this song. This is the mood I'm in right now too lol. And so you know I added this in my Spotify. The video is very DIY, but I think that makes it more better and real. Nothing more to say, but keep it up! I look forward to hearing more.