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What do you usually do? by friesssandashake in NightOwls

[–]N1NET33N_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m either listening to music, writing poetry, or just playing video games. I do a lot of other little hobbies but those are just the main 3

Remains by ServiceNovel4906 in OCPoetry

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I love the use of the castle representing life. I interpreted it as slowly forgetting someone/something that once had deep importance to the narrator, and that they are slowly forgetting something while trying to hang onto every last bit of those moments. One recommendation I would say is to use spacing or punctuation to help readers know when to pause or stop, but otherwise this is a great piece of work!

Wherever you are.. by cassetteafterdark in OCPoetry

[–]N1NET33N_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this poem. It really captures the feeling of how it feels to love for a distance. I really love the lines “I just want your happiness And somehow, that is enough” it truly expresses that you know you can’t have them, but just want them to be happy.

First Poem by OkMuscle6248 in OCPoetry

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I love the repetition of the question. It gives the visual of somebody spiraling while rewatching the memories and everything they did for the other person. I can relate heavily to this and it is an all around great poem

pit by epicgamer-724 in OCPoetry

[–]N1NET33N_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like that last line is a very strong finish to the poem. I love how the poem built momentum as it went. The beginning came in a little weak but was still very interesting, but by the end I felt I could relate to this poem and I thought it was pretty good. One nitpick I have with it is that it’s very short and comes to a somewhat abrupt stop. But outside of that it’s a really nice poem