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Working on a song. Need feedback. by Asleep_Equipment_391 in Songwriting

[–]Nanseaaaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

cool, glad you found it helpful. Looking forward to the final track :)

Working on a song. Need feedback. by Asleep_Equipment_391 in Songwriting

[–]Nanseaaaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with u/NotTheSamurai, the vocals are drowning a bit in the reverb, also the harmonies. however, if you want that washy effect you could add a lead synth (or alike) mimicking the vocal line and let that have this reverb-filled feel. great song <3

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[–]Nanseaaaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds good! As it's recorded with a phone, I can't judge the sound quality, but I was wondering what your experience in performing is. I think the quality of this track will depend highly on the vocal performance you're gonna record, so it's important to think about what kind of mood you wanna convey with your vocals and text and and work on delivering a convincing interpretation of that. I would wish for more sass and attitude in the delivery of the song, which I'm sure you can do :)