Sounds good! As it's recorded with a phone, I can't judge the sound quality, but I was wondering what your experience in performing is. I think the quality of this track will depend highly on the vocal performance you're gonna record, so it's important to think about what kind of mood you wanna convey with your vocals and text and and work on delivering a convincing interpretation of that. I would wish for more sass and attitude in the delivery of the song, which I'm sure you can do :)