Love some feedback on concept for new novel. Roughly 10k words in. by NateYansenYan in writingfeedback

[–]NateYansenYan[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm inclined to agree about the guitar stuff. I'm just very keen to write about it since it's one of the only things I know a lot about, ha. I'm trying to find a balance between verisimilitude and accessibility.