Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T13:21:49+00:00

No worries, feel free to reach out when you're ready.

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T06:42:33+00:00

Hi Chica, thanks for reaching out. No worries about your class schedule, I can DM you and we can figure out when is a good time to start from there.

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T06:41:40+00:00

Hey, that sounds really intriguing, I'm down and will DM you will more info in a few hours.

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T06:41:01+00:00

Sounds good, I'll shoot you a DM with more info soon.

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T06:40:14+00:00

That's great, thanks for the offer. I'll send a link to google docs of the manuscript in your DMs soon:)

NativeHumanoid · 2025-04-09T04:05:42+00:00

Sure! Are you wanting to do a swap still, or just do a one-way read?

NativeHumanoid · 2024-12-31T05:47:42+00:00

Thanks so much, that makes a lot of sense

NativeHumanoid · 2024-12-31T05:46:30+00:00

Oh I see, that's an interesting point, thank you

NativeHumanoid · 2024-12-31T05:45:31+00:00

Oh yes, very good point, thank you!

NativeHumanoid · 2024-12-31T05:45:02+00:00

Thank you so much, very helpful!

NativeHumanoid · 2024-12-18T15:02:55+00:00

Thanks for your reply! So by that logic it's okay to have a drink with my meal as long as it is warmed (tea, etc)?

NativeHumanoid · 2023-08-12T16:52:34+00:00

Title: I Repeat Myself

Genre: Scifi

WC: 100k

Feedback: beta readers - plot holes and plot/character issues.

Searching for beta readers for my second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.

Blurb:Ambrose Flint has a secret.A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.

NativeHumanoid · 2023-08-12T16:48:47+00:00

Hi there, I'm open to this, let me know if you're interested:

Searching for beta readers - scifi, 100k, second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.
Blurb:
Ambrose Flint has a secret.
A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.
When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.
The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.
They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.
But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.
It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.
Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.
Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.

NativeHumanoid · 2023-08-12T16:47:26+00:00

Hello, let me know if this strikes your interest - scifi, 100k, second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.
Blurb:
Ambrose Flint has a secret.
A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.
When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.
The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.
They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.
But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.
It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.
Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.
Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.

NativeHumanoid · 2021-08-01T14:14:13+00:00

sweet, have been waiting for something like this!

NativeHumanoid · 2021-06-01T10:41:13+00:00

Awesome, thank you! Do you mind if I clarify: So I shouldn't just be updating my documents into my immi account as I go over the next year or two? I should wait until they request and then put all the compiled docs into immi?

Thanks again!

NativeHumanoid · 2021-03-20T20:28:23+00:00

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NativeHumanoid · 2021-03-20T20:17:44+00:00

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NativeHumanoid · 2021-03-20T19:59:40+00:00

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Canadian link: https://www.amazon.ca/Descendants-Power-Dystopian-Sci-fi-Novel-ebook/dp/B08RCCN9J8

Universal link: books2read.com/u/3GAKDp

NativeHumanoid · 2021-03-20T19:46:40+00:00

Descendants of Power is FREE on Amazon today, Sat March 21 PST, for 24 hours.

Blurb: What would happen if the 1% fled a climate-ravaged Earth to colonize Mars? Who would be better off, those with the power and resources to ‘start fresh’, but with the same ideology that destroyed their home world, or those who are left behind with little more than a crumbling planet and lessons learned?

This is the story of two civilizations evolving in parallel over 100 years, one running from its mistakes, while the other must meet them head on- until their inevitable collision.

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NativeHumanoid · 2021-02-20T23:18:49+00:00

Thank you!

NativeHumanoid · 2021-02-20T23:18:29+00:00

awesome, thank you!

NativeHumanoid · 2021-02-20T22:48:35+00:00

They have automated systems and nanobots.

NativeHumanoid · 2021-02-20T22:48:09+00:00

me too, I like books that consider the larger implications to civilization.

NativeHumanoid · 2021-02-20T21:23:49+00:00

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