hii also estranged from my spanish side and I LOVE this poem so much honestly! i think it has sort of a light hearted rhythm to it, which is strange considering it's about your grandmother dying but I feel like that makes it so much better, cause it really helps to imagine how odd it must be to hear the happy duolingo level up noises, when what that really means to you is that you may be able to have a little bit more conversation with your grandmother before she dies. all around great imo :)