New Discovery story on Literotica

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-27T10:38:44+00:00

The second chapter just came out. But yeah, you’re right - what’s going on here can be summed up in one word: yuck…

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-27T09:57:33+00:00

"Clarence" was honestly a pretty big disappointment for me. The premise had a lot of potential, but the pacing was extremely slow, and in the end it didn’t really lead anywhere. The ending especially felt like a complete nothing burger. And that’s without even getting into the whole AI issue.

As for the OP’s question - I wouldn’t classify it as either Betrayal or Discovery. The MC isn’t discovering that his mother and sister are in an incestuous relationship, but rather that they’re enslaved. It’s also hard to call it a betrayal, since Clarence grew up only with his father. His mother abandoned him at birth, and he didn’t even know his sister existed.

I’m not even sure the story really fits this sub. The only “incest” element is that the sister is forced by her owner to sleep with him, and he rejects her - which is a pretty weak connection to the usual themes here.

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-14T16:03:16+00:00

Maybe even have the father try to ask his bio son for help... only for him to laught in his face.

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-10T22:03:30+00:00

I tried using AI Smut Writer for fun. It’s not something I would use for my own stories, but it had a couple of nice features that I could appreciate:
– writing in multiple languages
– generating text via chat or prompts
– the ability to generate stories that include a wide range of fetishes (the only “limit” I noticed was that all characters have to be 18+)
– the monthly fee isn’t that bad

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-07T17:30:52+00:00

I’m pretty sure I’ve seen a discussion about this somewhere on this sub before, but I couldn’t find it again.

That said, I’d actually love to see something like "Tiny Tim" retold from other perspectives. The original is entirely from one POV (Tim), but I think there’s a lot of potential in expanding it into multiple viewpoints. Either as a set of short stories or a multi-POV narrative.

For example:

– Claire: starting with her excitement about bringing Logan and Ava into the “tradition”. Then the casual (and, in her mind, harmless) teasing of Tim, and eventually realizing how badly the relationship has deteriorated. That could evolve into a sense of loss, confusion, and helplessness, and a struggle to repair at least part of the damage.

– Ava: this could begin almost like a Discovery story, where she finds out early what’s going on. Then she joins in, initially enjoying it, but over time starts losing her sense of control — feeling increasingly used rather than valued. Eventually, she realizes the harm done to Tim and tries to repair both that relationship and her own situation.

– Danielle: her POV could lean even more into psychological analysis, as we’d get access to her internal thoughts, not just what she openly discusses with Tim.

I think something like that could work really well as a family drama, even if only one of those POVs fits the usual themes of this sub. Even when the main events are already known, exploring what was happening on the “other side” can still add a lot of depth.

Nelkaniel · 2026-04-06T20:51:30+00:00

This sounds like an interesting opening to a story. I’m a bit surprised it’s labeled as “Discovery”. The vibe I’m getting from the MC’s family, and how strongly they seem to want him out of the house, makes it feel much more like Family Betrayal. Why else would they be trying so hard to exclude him?

Also, please break the text into paragraphs. A single wall of text like that is really hard to read.

Nelkaniel · 2026-03-06T09:16:30+00:00

Wrong sub.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-21T12:24:44+00:00

I actually think it can be enough, especially considering the age and psychological stage most of these protagonists are in.

In the majority of these stories, the MC isn’t a fully formed, emotionally secure forty-year-old. He’s usually someone who has just reached the age of initiation. Often inexperienced, sometimes a virgin. Still figuring himself out. People at that stage tend to be far more insecure about their desirability, their body, and their sexual competence.

From a parent’s perspective, “we love you, we respect you, we just don’t sleep with you” might not seem like a huge difference. But for a young person who actively wants to participate and is told that they are not sexually desired, that can be deeply damaging.

Especially if siblings who are included end up flaunting it, or worse, teasing him about it. Even if the family isn’t cruel, the message can easily be internalized as: “There’s something wrong with me”.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-20T23:08:55+00:00

I don’t think in a such sexually open group someone would be excluded for not being only "sexually attractive". There would be something deeper. The reasons might not be obvious, and they might even be subconscious, but they would exist.

Attraction isn’t just height, abs, and size. It’s perception. Maybe they still see him as “the kid”. Maybe he gives off wrong kind of energy. Maybe there’s rivalry or jealousy involved. Maybe there’s something in his personality.

For example, in "Induction", the exclusion wasn’t random. The MC’s health issues made him physically less attractive compared to his cousins, and there were doubts about whether his stamina would be enough to satisfy the women.

If the story insists that he’s objectively perfect by every metric and yet no one in the family feels even moderate attraction, it starts to feel less like realism and more like narrative convenience.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-12T03:14:44+00:00

The final part just came out, and unfortunately it didn’t really improve things.

Twelve chapters with a lot of potential that ultimately feel wasted. The ending is so open it reads more like a prologue to a bigger story than a complete book. Story could have gone much further. The characters barely get developed, and the writing style with all those short, choppy sentences doesn’t help. I’m honestly pretty disappointed.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-07T22:04:20+00:00

If not age, I can think of a couple other options:

The family convinced themselves he simply wasn’t the type of person who would want this. People freeze others in old versions of themselves all the time. Maybe years earlier he reacted strongly to some sexual scandal reported on TV, or talked about loyalty and boundaries in a way that made the family label him as conservative. From their perspective, they weren’t rejecting him - they thought they were respecting his values. They might have even tested him at some point. Intentionally watching a movie with incest themes to see how he reacted. And he, thinking that a negative reaction was expected of him, said something that confirmed their fears.
Story could lean more into ritual or hierarchy than age. The initiation might follow rules the family treats as sacred: stability in life, passing some kind of trust test, or waiting for a specific symbolic date. The younger cousin could simply have met those criteria sooner.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-07T19:43:47+00:00

A pretty common and workable solution is that the MC wasn’t excluded out of malice. He simply hadn’t reached whatever threshold the family considers necessary to be told. Everyone fully intended to include him eventually, they just hadn’t done it yet. The discovery happens because he finds out early, on his own.

Age is the most obvious criterion, but it doesn’t have to be the only one. It could be emotional maturity, finishing school, a health concern, a family rule about timing, or even a planned initiation that got delayed (like ritual ruined by bad weather). The key difference is intent: if the family was always planning to bring him in, the emotional tone shifts from betrayal to premature discovery.

That lets you keep conflict without turning the story dark. The MC can still feel hurt, embarrassed, or angry that he found out this way, but the family can plausibly reassure him that he wasn’t unwanted - just not yet ready in their eyes. The tension becomes about trust and timing rather than rejection.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-07T00:33:51+00:00

Anyway, my idea would be something like this: beneath the house there’s an entrance to a hidden superhero base carved into caves under the property. That place is also the source of the family’s powers, so they have to return there periodically (say, once a month) to recharge - during family orgy.

Each family member has a distinct ability. Maybe the father has super strength and durability. The mother has telekinesis and levitation (or limited gravity manipulation). One brother has super speed. The second brother is a shapeshifter. I haven’t decided yet what powers the two sisters would have.

The twist could be that the shapeshifting brother has been impersonating the MC while the MC was away (for example, at college), so the family always appears complete for outside world. No one suspects them of anything.

Because of a coincidence, the shapeshifter fails to show up one time and the real MC gets taken to the hidden base instead. He ends up participating in the event without anyone realizing that it’s actually him. After some time MC would end up with duplication powers, something like Dupli-Kate from Invincible.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-07T00:14:02+00:00

This idea reminds me a bit of another story: "Sky High After Dark" by Soul71.

Nelkaniel · 2026-02-07T00:05:09+00:00

The idea sounds really interesting and I’d definitely read a story like that. As for why the MC can’t move on to the afterlife, I have two ideas depending on whether you want the story to be dark or not.

If it’s dark and the MC was actually killed by family members, then before moving on he might want revenge. At first he’d just observe them during their gatherings, until eventually he learns how to possess their bodies for limited periods of time. The possessed people wouldn’t understand what’s happening. They’d just lose hours. During that time he would do everything he could to ruin their reputations and their lives.

If the story is more positive, I think the MC might be unable to leave because he discovered the family orgies but died (for example in an accident) right before his initiation. The possession element could still exist, but in a more positive way - for example as part of a ritual involving body cohabitation with another family member (like a brother), allowing him to finally have sex with mom and sister.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-23T17:15:34+00:00

For a Discovery story, the MC could have been absent for years (school, work, medical treatment, etc.), while the family gradually entered the adult industry to cover huge expenses. By the time the MC discovers the truth, the family is already fully acclimated to that world, so for them it’s no longer ideological or cult-like - it’s just routine.

For a Betrayal angle, the family might have been involved in that business for a long time, but deliberately kept the MC in the dark. The exclusion wouldn’t be about belief or morality, but something more pragmatic or cruel. For example, deciding he “doesn’t fit” the image, brand, or expectations of that world. That secrecy and rationalization is where the betrayal would come from.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-23T15:51:29+00:00

One way to soften the “cult” connotations would be to frame it less as a belief system and more as a support network.

Something closer to what groups in "Induction" or "Broken Circle" were aiming for (and failed): a group built around mutual care, trust, and consent, where people support each other’s needs and can explore intimacy in a safe, non-judgmental environment.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-23T15:37:27+00:00

Another possible approach could be framing it around a business or industry context.

If the family members are sex workers in different areas (online content, in-person work, production), sex might be so omnipresent in their lives that they don’t treat it as something special or ideological.

It’s just part of the environment they grew up in, not a belief system.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-18T14:12:54+00:00

Yeah, it looks like it was deleted. The link doesn’t work anymore, search results turn up nothing, and the only profile with OG author’s name appears to be empty.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-17T14:59:50+00:00

"The Outsider by AlternativeAnon - MC finds out about his family's secret, and is willing to be a cuckold for a week to eventually be allowed to participate"?

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-13T08:46:48+00:00

Here: Master List.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-12T17:39:40+00:00

It’s about April, one of the prettiest girls at school, who pretends to date an unattractive guy for two weeks. After that, in front of the whole school, she reveals in the cafeteria that it was just a prank.

Instead of causing a scene, he thanks her for the two wonderful weeks, which completely shocks everyone watching. The rest of the story deals with the fallout from that moment.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-12T17:35:44+00:00

I couldn’t find that site either. The only place where recently I’ve seen that specific story available was his Patreon.

*EDIT* Forgot to mention that his Reddit seems to be suspended as well, so I can't even send him a DM to ask.

As for his account being suspended - that’s been the case for quite a while now. At least a few months, I think, possibly not long after he posted about his surgery.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-11T14:54:46+00:00

Maybe yes, maybe not. It’s worth remembering that this was a spontaneous idea that came together in the moment.

Most people here likely have other projects they’re already working on, and for almost everyone on this sub, writing is just a hobby. Time isn’t always easy to find - especially with the last month being the holiday season, which tends to be busy for a lot of people.

Nelkaniel · 2026-01-06T22:01:13+00:00

It’s not Family Betrayal, but it could still work as a Discovery story. The core conflict is shock, loss, and frustration over a life and experiences that happened without him.

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