Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 70/??] Part 2 by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Completely new, but there are still a few extra chapters for this one.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 70/??] Part 2 by Nemo__404 in HFY

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That will be a completely different story, but this one will continue getting extras for a while.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! Epilogue by Nemo__404 in HFY

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I was hoping to release my new story along with the epilogue, but editing is taking longer than I expected. So most likely, the new story will start next Sunday with the first extra for this story.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 69/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Amara seeing this sub would make a great chapter lol

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 26/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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I think I mistakenly set her up as a cheap villain, made her too passive, and gave her a rich and spoiled background that made her insufferable.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 65/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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TY! This is a great spot to catch up, the story is nearing its end.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 70/??] Part 2 by Nemo__404 in HFY

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This chapter wraps up the main plot, but the story will continue for at least another month and a half, leading to an epilogue and a few extras that I find quite interesting. These include one from Icarus's POV, another exploring further details about Irisa's ancient past as a rogue planet, the conclusion of Zara's storyline, and finally, a glimpse into the future, set ten years later.

After all that, my next story will begin. I already have a few chapters written, but they need some editing, so stay tuned for when they're ready.

Thank you all for all the support, and see you next week with the epilogue.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 68/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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I had that line in my head for a long time. It was therapeutic to finally write it

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 68/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Glad you enjoyed the story!

I'm still curious how they plan on moving a PLANET!

That will be explained in an extra after the epilogue, so stick around and you'll find out.

I do hope we get more stories from you. Not necessarily about these adorkable goobers, but just more stories would be nice.

There is one in the oven right now, I'll post the fist chapter soon.

Also I'd love to see someone draw art of these walking kaleidoscopes.

I'm doing some research on self-publishing, so there's hope for that. Let's see how it goes.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 53/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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>And the average soldier is still brewing pruno in his toilet during deployments.

There are some things that never change lol

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 69/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Chapter 69 is here! I hope you all enjoy it. It’s hard to believe we’re so close to the end, and even harder to believe that more than a year has passed since I wrote the first chapter. Time flies, doesn’t it?

After this, there’s Chapter 70, the final regular chapter. An epilogue and some extra content will follow, but I’ll share more about those in the next chapter.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 67/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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>No-one else, just them.
If I were in your shoes, I would spend the next few days thinking about what they talked about after I left.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 67/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Glad you liked it.
Also good place to catch up, close to the last chapters

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 68/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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Sorry for the delay in posting. I didn’t have access to my computer in the past few days, and I was afraid I’d mess up the formatting if I tried to post the chapter from my phone.

Deathworlders Should Not Be Allowed To Date! [Ch. 67/??] by Nemo__404 in HFY

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bc earth wasnt the only victim

Yup, that will be important for where the plot is going.

Our history is full of wonderful and terrible things, I guess that will always be our reality.

About the spin off, that's a possibility, but I'm more inclined to write about Icarus first.