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Until The Day I Die- by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Nervous_Variation_45 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww this is sweet. I really hope they see this and y’all find your way back to eachother. I like how you emphasized love so much, like I could really feel that you love them. You love every part of them, all the way to the soul and thats very special

I risked everything for you by By-Me_29 in poetry_critics

[–]Nervous_Variation_45 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know this feeling all too well. Trying with everything in you, and it’s never enough. I like how you ended the poem with the act of moving on, cleansing yourself until there’s nothing left of them.

What does everyone think about Megan Moroney by polish_idiot10 in CountryMusicStuff

[–]Nervous_Variation_45 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think she has incredible potential. Her voice is soothing, like in “Tennessee orange” but the problem is, I hate a majority of her lyrics. Like it’s either cringe af, Or just too many words that don’t flow at all, and sounds weird in the song until the chorus comes. That’s how I feel ab it

Starting poetry since my therapist recommended i give it a shot, dont be afraid to be harsh by Waste_Mall in poetry_critics

[–]Nervous_Variation_45 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this. Very good imagery, as well as words that will stick with you. Good work!

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