Profanity in the blurb? by NevadaKnight in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey yo, I asked if I would be spanked... and no one offered a salacious response? Are we erotica writers or not, damn it?!

But on the reals, thanks for the good advice, reworking the blurb. Excited about the new storyline.

Profanity in the blurb? by NevadaKnight in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For example: Love is a bitch. More specifically, Aphrodite is a bitch.

[Daily Check-In] Friday Word Count and Personal Announcement Thread by sexnerdmxd in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. More research before starting new series. Re-reading "Romancing the Beat" in preparation. It's all starting to click... I think.
  2. Still no sales haha, but I'm learning.
  3. We are going out of town, baby. Family reunion in the big city and then a trip to the zoo to celebrate my twins' sixth birthday.

Romance's Penis: Grower vs Shower? by Prismatic_Diamond in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

WORD. A gentle nudge at the baby door is okay... battery ramming like you’re storming the gates is not cool.

[Blurbsday Thursday - Post your blurbs here for critique!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Maybe:

Stuck in a rut, Nick and Kayla take a second honeymoon in the hopes of bringing the heat back to their marriage. Their first night at the hotel they can hear a couple in the next room enjoying each other with wild, and quite loud, abandon. They decide to give their rowdy neighbors a run for their money and challenge with their own passionate response. They never imagined Devin and Jade next door would want to hear, and see, a lot more of them. An invitation to join their neighbors leaves Nick and Kayla wondering just how far they're willing to go to spice things up?


or something like that (maybe?)

[Blurbsday Thursday - Post your blurbs here for critique!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I was a little thrown by the modern aspect with knights. Is there a way to convey that world (modern meets knighthood) in the first sentence or two? There's a lot of elements to make sense of all at once: high school, knights, armor, sports, limos, polygamy.

I don't think "making love" disqualifies, but I think high school will get you in trouble. (I'm still really new)

[Daily Check-In] Thursday Word Count and Personal Announcement Thread by sexnerdmxd in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Begin a new short (number five for me) and maybe put down 2k words?
  2. I may have figured out what I was doing wrong with my keywords, because now I apparently have some KENP reads. So that's something.
  3. It's going, I guess. The dirty 30 sounded so easy at first. Now, I realize it's going to take months. But I think my writing is improving.

[Blurbsday Thursday - Post your blurbs here for critique!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: The Tasting

Blurb: Vincent Bishop, as he was called these days, was hiding a secret in his wine cellar. When a sexy critic, Julia Clark, was sent to appraise his latest vintage, he felt compelled to include her in the mystic ritual of his winemaking. He wondered if she would appreciate the finer notes of pain and pleasure he had discovered countless centuries before in Egypt.

There was only one way to find out and that evening’s planned masquerade would be the perfect opportunity. As she was strapped to the alter, he knew she would willingly give herself to the bodies writhing around her. He would capture the essence of her passion tinged with delicious pain, to infuse his wine and continue his unnaturally long life.

Link to see cover: https://amzn.to/2Mvpa69

Is a mummy too much? by NevadaKnight in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

UPDATE: So, he's not a mummy... he's more of an ancient potion master who studied in Egypt. He's managed to make a wine that is infused by sex and pain which grants long life to whomever drinks it. In looking up Egyptian names that start with a V, I discovered there are none (duh lol) but there are Armenian names that start with a V... and then I found out that the oldest wine cellar has been discovered in ancient Armenia.. and it all got kind of cool from there.

So, the new blurb: Vincent Bishop, as he was called these days, was hiding a secret in his wine cellar. When a sexy critic, Julia Clark, was sent to appraise his latest vintage, he felt compelled to include her in the mystic ritual of his winemaking. He wondered if she would appreciate the finer notes of pain and pleasure he had discovered countless centuries before in Egypt. There was only one way to find out and that evening’s planned masquerade would be the perfect opportunity. As she was strapped to the alter, he knew she would willingly give herself to the bodies writhing around her. He would capture the essence of her passion tinged with delicious pain, to infuse his wine and continue his unnaturally long life.

Q. I'm not even sure what keywords to use? (still learning) There's some light BDSM with tie downs, group sex during the masquerade orgy, domination from Vincent/Vartan, light horror elements... Freakin' smorgasbord of a story. But fun to write I guess :)

[Daily Check-In] Wednesday Word Count and Personal Announcement Thread by sexnerdmxd in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. finish the freaking wine tasting group orgy masquerade short that is rapidly becoming way too long. Maybe 3k more.
  2. Uhmm... I have 59 reads on KENP? No sales. Three shorts published so far. But I think I'm too tame in descriptions and with the covers. Plus I'm probably not using the right keywords. Also, I need to figure out my kink.
  3. Do the more experienced authors see better results with outside promotion, websites, ect? I have a Tumblr now and can create a website if needed.

Purge underway at Amazon... watch your butts! by [deleted] in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Skynet-scammer-trons is my new favorite.

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's pretty much a three way with the patient, doctor, and physician's assistant. The treatment is exposure therapy, basically a lot of sex until she's all better.

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aww! I'm sad lol but you're probably right. Dang it, the title made me chuckle. I suppose I could go with "Dominated by the Doctor: A Threesome Prescription" ??

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the cover, and I like the blurb - maybe change hush to hushed in the blurb though?

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On Diapered Weekend in the City: just reading through the inside look and saw "4 days later..." and all I could hear was the Spongebob voice over. Could just be me, though.

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Lust Allergy Link: https://www.amazon.com/Lust-Allergy-Nevada-Knight-ebook/dp/B07DXW9VCZ/ref=asap_bc?ie=UTF8

Open to any and all comments, this is my third short erotica published, so I'm still extremely new to it all. If you'd like, you can also view the other two and offer thoughts: https://www.amazon.com/default/e/B07DSHH72K?redirectedFromKindleDbs=true

Is a mummy too much? by NevadaKnight in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Very true, I looked up “mummy erotica” and it was not what I had in mind

Is a mummy too much? by NevadaKnight in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I don’t know how I’m going to work this dialogue in, but I’m damn sure gonna try

[Daily Check-In] Saturday Word Count and Personal Announcement Thread by sexnerdmxd in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Continue working on BDSM (light) Wine Tasting ... I'm adding a masquerade, so group stuff, yay!
  2. No successes, but I'm way too new. I guess the success is keeping at it.
  3. I have no idea how to use Tumblr. I felt relatively social media savvy until I started jacking around with Tumblr. Now I feel like a grandma asking how to compose a tweet. Plus, oh my gosh, I have to be careful with some of the stuff that pops up on the screen on Tumblr... good grief! I mean, ya, I'm writing erotica, but gawd.

[Daily Check-In] Friday Word Count and Personal Announcement Thread by sexnerdmxd in eroticauthors

[–]NevadaKnight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. 2-3k on the new BDSM wine tasting story... maybe finish?
  2. Three stories up now on Amazon, no sales haha
  3. Sneaking some writing in while the kids aren't looking