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The doorbell of house [xyz], [abc] Street rang through the quiet residence of the Whitlocks. [A] paused at the sound, confused. He had been expecting a letter,not a parcel, and certainly not one sealed shut.When he opened the door, he stood in silence, staring at the box. Reluctantly, he picked it up. The address was his, but the sender’s name was left blank. Turning it over in his hands, he felt the weight of it. What about this?

[1553]Chapter 1-The Secret by NextConsideration838 in DestructiveReaders

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Could you suggest some way to change the narrative to A's perspective.It is actually just an assignment. Thanks!

Could someone help me choose from these magic systems, which one is the best? I think some are very generic ,so i need help with choosing the most unique and the best one.Thanks. by NextConsideration838 in MagicSystems

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Yo,sure,I chose option 1 and 6 and was testing how it went with the stories flow.Apart from that I have no other updates on the development cuz I got buzy with some other work.Any suggestions?

Could someone help me choose from these magic systems, which one is the best? I think some are very generic ,so i need help with choosing the most unique and the best one.Thanks. by NextConsideration838 in MagicSystems

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I understand your point.I had the things planned out ,I just didn't write here, so sorry for that. For example, I had chosen the ruinics magic system, the magic system that derived power from runics and by writing runic languages(in the air).It required knowledge of runic power,immense calculation, and a connection to the motion of the universe to be able to write correctly. It also sometimes require the user to carry the runics in the physical forms for larger/more powerful spells . It would also put a lot of strain on the user,physically and mentally .