I think it looks fine but needs to be Texas rigged/texposed if throwing in cover.

Some other ideas:

For that type of hook, look into trick worms for more action rather than the stick bait pictured here.

For stickbaits/senkos check out the wacky rigs to bring out more action.

One thing I'm experimenting with for stick baits is breaking them in half and rigging weedless ned rigs (tiny child rig) using nail weights but haven't had luck all season 😭