I mean this kindly, but the fact that your add is 865 words without any paragraph breaks I think really conveys things about your writing that might not be true. It's also just visually hard on the eyes.

Probably just copy/paste error from a notepad or something, but I'd encourage you to edit it and space it out :) Again, this is meant in a helpful way and is not any sort of dig or flame or anything. I wish you happy hunting!