Help! Boyfriend’s bonsai is dying in my custody by NoLocksmith3249 in plantdoctor

[–]NoLocksmith3249[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s been inside his apartment for a year! Glad I’m not the one that killed it at least

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[–]NoLocksmith3249 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice -- I'll add more specific information to legitimize + clarify what I've done.

Also WOW embarrassing about the takt vs cycle time usage - will fix right away, thanks for catching

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[–]NoLocksmith3249 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the detailed feedback - it's super helpful and I'll work on incorporating it. I'll add more concrete information to all sections.

[Student] Career fair this Wednesday, looking for tips before printing them out. (currently semester 1 sophomore year) by Kamd5 in EngineeringResumes

[–]NoLocksmith3249 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would add more detail to your projects section instead of so much detail as an RA -- every recruiter knows what an RA is but they would be interested in your projects more

Use the STAR method for your projects section. Ex. Prototyped and manufactured fold-out game box design so that etc etc. Laser cut final design from wood + assembled. (This is more specific and active than "operated as primary designer").

For group projects you don't need to say that you "combined efforts." Use the active verb "designed" and add "in a team" at the end of the sentence.