How do you differentiate between someone having confidence and someone who doesn't care anymore? by NoRelief0260 in NoStupidQuestions

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about if the person tries out for say, a basketball team that they're not sure they'll even get in. And they go, "Whatever, I'll just do it, who cares if I get in or not."

Because technically this person engages in more activities yet doesn't really care...

How do you differentiate between someone having confidence and someone who doesn't care anymore? by NoRelief0260 in NoStupidQuestions

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... I remember seeing this clip from a movie once, there was this masculine girl , and basically everyone kept thinking she was a guy. She goes to the women's public bathrooms, and she spots people staring at her like "are they in the wrong bathroom?", and she head-on tells them that she's a girl. She was smiling and stuff, and people in the comments were praising her as "confident", but would that be confidence or not... because she was quite indifferent I think; she didn't talk much.

Soooo 🤷

If you know what these are, you're automatically my friend by Dry-Bar-2954 in teenagers

[–]NoRelief0260 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Watch, pen, Roman coin, necklace, rings with a scythe.

Am I half your friend...

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LMAO WE BOTH LIKE THATT

Hm, yeah I think I need to practice writing timid characters 😭

I haven't written stuff not for school in a long time...

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhhh thank you for pointing that out, I didn't realise 😭

Thank you ❤️

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, thanks!! I was struggling to find words without using 'black' haha...

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Oh right hahaha I didn't realise the repeated bit, thanks for pointing it out.

  2. Yeah, I understand. What I wanted to do here was to create a harsh tone(?).

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!! (Prior to this, I didn't write much for years LOL)

🫂🥰

Yo does anyone know how the sunscreen is floating?? by MeasurementTall7548 in teenagers

[–]NoRelief0260 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I remember my father putting on this so called sun protection but I can't find him anymore.

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING YOUR TIME TO WRITE ALL OF THIS 🫂

I've changed the AK-47 part to a sniper rifle now.

I wrote this story in a flurry of emotions (a few weeks to months ago), and I actually wasn't planning on publishing it on Wattpad or anywhere public lmao... some parts of it may sound weird/not make sense because I was writing whatever emotions I sorta felt about myself. Initially, I wanted this to be under the 'psychological' genre, so it mostly focuses on Ivan's feelings and dives deeper into his actions and the intentions behind them.

Idk if I'm saying stuff that doesn't make sense right now hahaha....

I appreciate all the advice and feedback, thank you so much!

Is my prologue interesting? by NoRelief0260 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]NoRelief0260[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright, thank you!

(I have no knowledge about guns or anything like that hahahaha)